BehaviorsMannerisms Our orange cats looked on from the fence their tails up like antennas My hair flicked like black fire and I thought I was pretty cool riding up and down the block age five in my brothers handmedown shirt ID: 430465
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Physical DescriptionsBehaviors/MannerismsOur orange cats looked on from the fence, their tails up like antennas.My hair flicked like black fire, and I thought I was pretty cool riding up and down the block, age five, in my brother's hand-me-down shirt.Mom said hungry dogs lived on that street, and red anger lived in their eyes. Their throats were hard with extra bones from biting kids on bikes, she said.I stood at the window, looking out, amazed and devious, with the devilish horns of my butch haircut standing up.My face was hot, my hair sweaty, but nothing scary seemed to happen.The street had looked like our street: parked cars, tall trees, a sprinkler hissing on a lawn, and an old woman bending over her garden.I saw her face in the window, curlers piled high, and she waved a dish towel at me.My ankle was purple, large and hot, and the skin was flaked like wood shavings.I opened my mouth, and wind tickled the back of my throat. When I squinted, I could see past the end of the block.I stood at the window, looking out, amazed and devious, with the devilish horns of my butch haircut standing up.From behind the window, I let my finger slowly uncurl like a bean plant rising from earth. I uncurled it, then curled it back and made a fist.I did figure eights, rode up the curbs and onto lawns, bumped into trees, and rode over a garden hose a hundred times because I liked the way the water sprang up from the sprinkler after the pressure of my tires.I laid down on the sidewalk, and the kid, with fingers in his mouth, said, "OK.“He backed up and slowly, like a tank, advanced. I folded my arms behind my head and watched a jay swoop by with what looked like a cracker in its beak, when the tire climbed over my ankle and sparks of pain cut through my skin. I sat up quickly, my eyes flinging tears like a sprinkler.
Character descriptions
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CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS CONTINUEDLooking at your chart:What kind of character is the narrator?How did Gary Soto’s physical and behavioral descriptions help you picture and “hear” the character?What are ways you can flesh out a character by using a description?Slide3
ADDING DESCRIPTIONS TO YOUR OWN CHARACTERSNow, it’s time to add rich character descriptions to your own personal narrative! Make a chart for your own character(s) at the time you intend the story to take place.YOUR GOAL:Add description to your narrative that will cause your reader to be able to “see” the character in his or her mind AND START THIS TONIGHT!Slide4
Checking inToday’s goals were:Students will understand how character descriptions enhances an overall story’s effect on the reader.Students will learn how to implement character descriptions into their own personal narrative.How well do you feel about these goals now?4: I could easily teach someone else about how character descriptions enhance an overall story’s effect and how writers can implement them.3: I would be a little hesitant teaching someone else, but I think I have a decent understanding.2: I still have questions about how character descriptions enhance a story and/or how writers can implement them.1: I don’t understand how character descriptions enhance a story and/or how writers can implement them.