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10/15/14
Freshman CompensationSlide2
Opportunity to Voice Your Opinion
Florida
State will be conducting a two day study of
Valencia and
would like to speak
with students
about the need for developmental education
Students will receive a $25 gift card for participating, plus they are able to voice their opinions about the need for developmental education.
The focus group will take place on Tuesday Oct. 21,
1-2pm
2:15-3:15pm
3:30-4:30pm
Location: West, Special events center (Building 8)
Students will get a phone call reminder on Monday night Oct. 20.Slide3
What to Expect
Pass out Graded Assignments
Pass out and Go Over Works Cited Partner Activity – Clarify Correct Answers
Complete Additional MLA citation practice exercise
Peer
Review of Draft of Definition Essay on CourageSlide4
Go Over Works Cited Partner Activity – Clarify Correct AnswersSlide5
Issue 1: Citing sources with two authors
Two or Three Authors
:
Rule: Format
:
First listed author's name, last name first,
next listed author's name(s) in normal form.
Full book title (italics). City of publication: Publisher's name, year of publication. Print
.
Preziosi
, Donald and
Louise A. Hitchcock
.
Aegean Art and Architecture
. Oxford: Oxford University Press, 1999.PrintSlide6
Issue 2: Citing sources with editor rather than author
RULE:
Format
: If there is an editor rather than an author, list the editor first.
EXAMPLE:
Paula, Byers K., ed.
Encyclopedia of World Biography
. Detroit: Gale Research, 1997. Print.
Finley, M.I., ed.
Atlas of Classical Archaeology
. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1977. Print.Slide7
Issue 3: Citing magazine article with two authors
RULE:
Format
:
Author's name, last name first. "Article title".
Publication title
(Italics). Date of publication:
page numbers. Print.Daly, Devin. "Sources of Disgust." Newsweek. 12 Nov. 2009: 40-42. Print.
Bertelsen
, Ann and Daniel Gregory. “Palo Alto Idea House.” Sunset. Sept 2002. 107-8. Print. Slide8
Issue 4: Citing journal article with multiple authors
RULE:
Format: The most basic entry for a journal consists of the author name(s), article title, journal name, volume
number
, year published, page numbers, and medium.
Last Name, First Name. "Article Title." Journal Name Volume Number(Year Published): Page Numbers
.
Medium.
Rich, Tina, Rachel L. Allen and Andrew H. Wylie. “Defying death after DNA damage.” Nature 407 (2000):777-83.
Print
.Slide9
Issue 5: Citing a Wiki
RULE:
Wikipedia MLA Citation Template
“
Article Title.”
Wikipedia: The Free Encyclopedia.
Wikimedia Foundation, Inc., date last updated
(DD Month YYYY). Web. Date accessed (DD Month YYYY). <URL>(URL is optional)
“Amaranth.” Wikipedia, The Free Encyclopedia. Wikipedia Foundation. 5 Jan 2014. Web. 10 Jan 2014Slide10
Issue 6: Citing a Film
RULE:
The Social Network
. Dir. David Fincher.
Perfs
. Jesse Eisenberg, Andrew Garfield and Justin Timberlake. Columbia
Pictures, 2010. Film.Slide11
More Practice –
Pass out MLA Citation Resource
Complete Works Cited Practice Activity Slide12
Exchange with Partner -Works Cited Practice Activity
Go over answersSlide13
Take a look at Your Works Cited Page in Your Definition Essay
Make any corrections in pencil or pen, based on your additional understanding of MLASlide14
Determining Credibility of Sources (Online)Slide15
Why is it Important to Evaluate Credibility?Slide16
Why is it Important to Evaluate Credibility?
When a writer uses a book or published article as a source in a research paper, there are not many questions to ask about the credibility of that source. Many editors have gone through the evaluation process before publication. Using books and the library databases as your first line of research options is a good strategy.
The Web, however, is different. Anyone can put any information on the Web, and sometimes information looks more credible at first glance than it is on closer inspection
.
Ask yourself, "Is this source credible
?" every time you choose a Web source.
This is especially true of sources with no author or organizational affiliation. You will likely have to navigate to the homepage of the site to judge its credibilitySlide17
Determining Credibility of Online Sources
Checklists available:
http://
www.lib.umd.edu/binaries/content/assets/public/usereducation/evaluating-web-sites-checklist-form.pdfSlide18
Determining Credibility of Online Sources
How do you determine if a source is credible? You can evaluate the reliability and scholarship of information you find both online and in print by using these
guidelines
:
URL
Authorship
Publisher
Accuracy
and objectivityTimelinessSponsorshipSlide19
Pass out Handouts on Determining Credibility of Online Sources including Sample ChecklistSlide20
Determining Credibility of Online Sources
Guidelines
What is the URL?Slide21
Determining Credibility of Online Sources
Guidelines
Who is the Author?Slide22
Determining Credibility of Online SourcesSlide23
Determining Credibility of Online SourcesSlide24
Determining Credibility of Online SourcesSlide25
Determining Credibility of Online Sources
Guidelines
Sites that appear to be news media but
aren't
Examiner.com
- the content is by amateur writers and lacks editorial oversight (not to be confused with the
San Francisco Examiner
) (see 1,
2, 3)Associated Content (not to be confused with the Associated Press)Articlesnatch.comThe Onion - in a few high profile incidents this satirical news site was mistaken for news media by non-English countriesSlide26
Determining Credibility of Online Sources
Guidelines
Scholarly
journals
Scholarly
journals are normally reliable sources, but some journals have a reputation for bias or unreliability.
QuackWatch
has a
list of non-recommended periodicals, however, a short list of journals which should be used with extreme caution include:
Journal of American Physicians and Surgeons (JPandS), publishes from an unscientific, right-wing viewpointRivista di Biologia, edited by Giuseppe
Sermonti, noted for publishing fringe theoriesMedical Hypotheses, non-peer reviewed and known for unscientific contentEnergy & Environment
, edited by and published in by climate change skepticsMedical Veritas
: The Journal of Medical Truth
, published by Medical
Veritas
International Inc., listed by
Quackwatch
as a "questionable organization".
[1]
Mankind QuarterlySlide27
Credibility Practice
Let’s practice determining whether the sources on the next series of slides are credible.
Topic: Leonardo da Vinci’s Mona LisaSlide28
Source 1
http://
www.metmuseum.org/toah/hd/leon/hd_leon.htmSlide29
Source 1
http://
www.metmuseum.org/toah/hd/leon/hd_leon.htmSlide30
Source 2
http://www.academia.edu/5656292/_Whats_Behind_the_Mona_Lisa_in_the_Walters_Art_Museum
_Slide31
Source 2 (
continued)Slide32
Source 2 (continued)Slide33
Source 3
http://
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mona_LisaSlide34
Source 3 (continued)Slide35
Source 4
http://
www.nbcnews.com/science/science-news/mona-lisa-researchers-work-find-woman-behind-famous-painting-n93491Slide36
Source 4 (continued)
http://
www.nbcnews.com/science/science-news/mona-lisa-researchers-work-find-woman-behind-famous-painting-n93491Slide37
Source 5
https://
answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=1006052329267Slide38
Pass Out and Review Lessons Learned on Descriptive Essays Slide39
The Guitarist - Picasso
Harriet Tubman and the Underground Railway by Paul CollinsSlide40
1925 Los Angeles by Leonardo
Afremov
At Eternity’s Gate
Van GoghSlide41
1925 Los Angeles by Leonardo
Afremov
Gettysburg – Paul
PhilippoteauxSlide42
Dances by Arthur Bowen DaviesSlide43
Alfred
Eisenstaedt's Day in Times Square
V-Day 1945
Cover of Album Dosage by Collective SoulSlide44Slide45Slide46Slide47Slide48Slide49Slide50Slide51Slide52
Cool Titles
The
Intellectual Primate
Life
in the Early World
I Walk A Lonely Road
Pieces of Who I AmNature is Our MotherThe Freedom WarriorThis Poor SoulA Land of TomorrowThe EscapeSlide53
Great Opening Lines
Have
you ever been in a place where you are different from everyone else and feel as if you don’t belong there?....Looking at two children holding hands can be interpreted many different ways in the early 1900s.
How
smart are primates compared to humans? At what rate is their intellect increasing?
What kind of art do you consider old?
The
barren leaves plummet one by one without muttering a word each time they drop into the pool of utter emptiness. People walk by ignoring me, turning their heads the other way just so they do not have to face me. All I am asking for is love; to be noticed and nurtured, but I just cannot seem to get anyone’s attention no matter how much effort I put into it. ……Have you ever seen an image that is so unique it makes you want to question its meaning more deeply?Slide54
Great Opening Lines
When
you look at a person from the outside, you see nothing but what they want you to see. No one will ever see the true person unless that person allows them to..
Who
are the culprits who left this polar bear and its cub on a sheet of ice and snow in the middle of the ice-cold ocean?
What
happens to us when we die?
Imagine the stench of cannon sulfur mixed with the smell of rotting flesh! Slide55
Lessons
Put title of painting in quotation marks:
"Still Life with Geraniums" (Matisse, 1910) is one of the most
exquisite artisan
paintings
.
When considering the title of your essay, don’t simply use the title of the painting – tie the title into the meaning you feel the work conveysSlide56
Lessons – Common Errors
Sentence FragmentsSlide57
Andre practiced jump shots to impress Coach Nelson.
A sentence must have a
subject
,
verb
, and
complete thought
.
Andre
= subject,
practiced
= verb, and the thought =
complete
, so you have a
sentence
.Slide58
Andre
spinning
the ball to show off his skills.
Recognize a
fragment
when you see one.
And
spun
the ball to show off his skills.
As Andre
spun
the ball to show off his skills.
Andre
spun
the ball to show off his skills.
Spinning
≠ a verb, so you have a
fragment
!
Now there’s
no
subject, so you still have a
fragment
.
Yikes
!
Now the thought is
not
complete!
Finally
!
A subject, a verb,
and
a complete thought!Slide59
Recognize
fused sentences
and
comma splices
.
Andre sank a perfect basket from half court unfortunately the coach’s back was turned.
Andre sank a perfect basket from half court, unfortunately the coach’s back was turned.
You
cannot
run together
two
sentences with
no
punctuation!
You
cannot
join
two
sentences with a
comma
!
Andre sank a perfect basket from half
court unfortunately
the coach’s back was turned.
Andre sank a perfect basket from half
court, unfortunately
the coach’s back was turned.Slide60
Fix the error with a
period
and a
capital letter
.
Andre sank a perfect basket from half court unfortunately the coach’s back was turned.
Swish
goes the
period
!
Andre sank a perfect basket from half
court. Unfortunately,
the coach’s back was turned.Slide61
Fix the error with a
comma
and a
coordinating conjunction
.
Andre sank a perfect basket from half court unfortunately the coach’s back was turned.
Be my
FANBOYS
—
for
,
and
,
nor
,
but
,
or
,
yet
, and
so
.
Andre sank a perfect basket from half
court,
but
the
coach’s back was turned.Slide62
Fix the error with a
semicolon
.
Andre sank a perfect basket from half court unfortunately the coach’s back was turned.
Use the semicolon
sparingly
— 3 to 4 times per essay,
max
.
Andre sank a perfect basket from half
court; unfortunately,
the coach’s back was turned.Slide63
Fix the error with a
subordinate conjunction
.
Andre sank a perfect basket from half court unfortunately the coach’s back was turned.
Reduce
one
of the two clauses to an
incomplete
thought.
Andre sank a perfect basket from half court
after
the coach’s back was turned.Slide64
Let’s PracticeSlide65
Which one is Fragment?
A
Maria wasn't watching her plate of barbecue very carefully.
B
So Santana, the family beagle, snatched a chicken leg hanging over the edge.
C As baked beans and potato salad slid onto Maria's new sandals. Slide66
Fragment and Fix
C
As baked beans and potato salad slid onto Maria's new sandals.
How to Fix It:
Maria
wasn't watching her plate of barbecue very
carefully so Santana
, the family beagle, snatched a chicken leg hanging over the edge. Baked beans and potato salad slid onto Maria's new sandals. Slide67
Which one is Fragment?
A
Ever since Andre peeked at Melissa's paper during the biology exam.
B
Guilt has consumed him.
C
Even the blueberries floating in his cereal bowl seem like the accusing eyes of Dr. Gregory, his microbiology instructor. Slide68
Fragment and Fix
A
Ever since Andre peeked at Melissa's paper during the biology exam.
How to Fix It:
Ever since Andre peeked at Melissa's paper during the biology
exam,
g
uilt has consumed him.Slide69
Which one is Fragment?
A
James opened the door of his cluttered refrigerator.
B
Which caused a pint of blueberries to fall to the floor.
C
The fruit bounced and rolled everywhere in an explosion of indigo.
Slide70
Fragment and Fix
B
Which caused a pint of blueberries to fall to the floor.
How to Fix It:
James opened the door of his cluttered
refrigerator which caused
a pint of blueberries to fall to the floor.Slide71
Fragment
and Fix
C
But was too shy to raise her hand and volunteer an answer.
She understood the fragment practice that Mrs. Markham was going over in
class but was too shy to raise her hand and volunteer an answer. Slide72
Which one is Fragment?
A
Head
down, Lela stared at the textbook on her desk.
B
She understood the fragment practice that Mrs. Markham was going over in class.
C
But was too shy to raise her hand and volunteer an answer. Slide73
Complete Practice Exercise on Fragments, Comma Splices and Fused SentencesSlide74
Exchange with a Partner and grade Completed Practice Exercise on Fragments, Comma Splices and Fused SentencesSlide75
Item 1
The dogs drooled while we ate slices of hot
pizza but the cat feigned nonchalance even
though we knew that she wanted a pepperoni.
drooled. While
pizza, but
nonchalance. Even
No change is necessary.
The dogs
drooled while
we ate slices of hot
A
pizza but
the cat feigned
nonchalance even
B
C
though we knew that she wanted a pepperoni.
drooled. While
pizza, but
nonchalance. Even
No change is necessary.
The dogs
drooled while
we ate slices of hot
A
pizza
but
the cat feigned
nonchalance even
B
C
though we knew that she wanted a pepperoni.
drooled. While
pizza, but
nonchalance. Even
No change is necessary.Slide76
Mary Ellen screamed, her roommate’s pet tarantula crawled out of the bag of popcorn.
screamed her
screamed; because, her
screamed as her
No change is necessary.
Item 2
Mary Ellen
screamed, her
roommate’s pet tarantula crawled out of the bag of popcorn.
screamed her
screamed; because, her
screamed as her
No change is necessary.
Mary Ellen
screamed, her
roommate’s pet tarantula crawled out of the bag of popcorn.
screamed her
screamed; because, her
screamed as her
No change is necessary.Slide77
Item 3
Running late with dinner, Elizabeth fussed with
seasonings and wiped spots off the
glasses. While the family stared at their empty
plates.
dinner; Elizabeth
seasonings, and
glasses while
No change is necessary.
Running late with
dinner, Elizabeth
fussed with
A
seasonings and
wiped spots off the
B
glasses. While
the family stared at their empty
C
plates.
dinner; Elizabeth
seasonings, and
glasses while
No change is necessary.
Running late with
dinner, Elizabeth
fussed with
A
seasonings and
wiped spots off the
B
glasses. While
the family stared at their empty
C
plates.
dinner; Elizabeth
seasonings, and
glasses while
No change is necessary.Slide78
Everyone scrambled off the lakeside patio. When the 10-foot alligator lumbered onto shore.
patio when
patio; when
patio, when
No change is necessary.
Item 4
Everyone scrambled off the lakeside
patio. When
the 10-foot alligator lumbered onto shore.
patio when
patio; when
patio, when
No change is necessary.
Everyone scrambled off the lakeside
patio. When
the 10-foot alligator lumbered onto shore.
patio when
patio; when
patio, when
No change is necessary.Slide79
Item 5
The glass of iced tea promised thirst-quenching
refreshment Roseanne, however, had to beat
Maria to the refrigerator as they raced through
the front door.
refreshment. Roseanne
however; had
refrigerator; as
No change is necessary.
The glass of iced tea promised thirst-quenching
refreshment Roseanne
,
however, had
to beat
A
B
Maria to the
refrigerator as
they raced through
C
the front door.
refreshment. Roseanne
however; had
refrigerator; as
No change is necessary.
The glass of iced tea promised thirst-quenching
refreshment
Roseanne
,
however, had
to beat
A
B
Maria to the
refrigerator as
they raced through
C
the front door.
refreshment. Roseanne
however; had
refrigerator; as
No change is necessary.Slide80
Warren wanted to make a good impression on Melody but the soda explosion that soaked his shirt ruined their first meeting.
Melody; but, the
Melody; however, the
Melody, however, the
No change is necessary.
Item 6
Warren wanted to make a good impression on
Melody but the
soda explosion that soaked his shirt ruined their first meeting.
Melody; but, the
Melody; however, the
Melody, however, the
No change is necessary.
Warren wanted to make a good impression on
Melody but the
soda explosion that soaked his shirt ruined their first meeting.
Melody; but, the
Melody; however, the
Melody, however, the
No change is necessary.Slide81
Item 7
Because of the hot sun, ice cream ran down the
cone and coated Randall’s fingers, his tongue
couldn’t keep up
.
sun; ice cream
cone, and
fingers, for his
No change is necessary.
Because of the hot
sun, ice cream
ran down the
A
cone and
coated Randall’s
fingers, his
tongue
B
C
couldn’t keep up
.
sun; ice cream
cone, and
fingers, for his
No change is necessary.
Because of the hot
sun, ice cream
ran down the
A
cone and
coated Randall’s
fingers,
his
tongue
B
C
couldn’t keep up
.
sun; ice cream
cone, and
fingers, for his
No change is necessary.Slide82
Item 8
Wanda took a deep breath and got ready to yell. Because Paul was about to explain why his half of the rent would be late again.
yell, because
yell because
yell for
No change is necessary.
Wanda took a deep breath and got ready to
yell. Because
Paul was about to explain why his half of the rent would be late again.
yell, because
yell because
yell for
No change is necessary.
Wanda took a deep breath and got ready to
yell. Because
Paul was about to explain why his half of the rent would be late again.
yell, because
yell because
yell for
No change is necessary.Slide83
Item 9
After Simon bought roses for Emily, he spotted
Derek’s car in her driveway and realized that this
gesture would not repair the relationship or win
back her love.
Emily. he
driveway. And
relationship; or
No change is necessary.
After Simon bought roses for
Emily, he
spotted
A
Derek’s car in her
driveway and
realized that this
B
gesture would not repair the
relationship or
win
C
back her love.
Emily. he
driveway. And
relationship; or
No change is necessary.
After Simon bought roses for
Emily, he
spotted
A
Derek’s car in her
driveway and
realized that this
B
gesture would not repair the
relationship or
win
C
back her love.
Emily. he
driveway. And
relationship; or
No change is necessary.Slide84
Item 10
Since Larry had studied for hours; he was relieved to find a big red
A
at the top of his grammar quiz.
hours he
hours. He
hours, he
No change is necessary.
Since Larry had studied for
hours; he
was relieved to find a big red
A
at the top of his grammar quiz.
hours he
hours. He
hours, he
No change is necessary.
Since Larry had studied for
hours; he
was relieved to find a big red
A
at the top of his grammar quiz.
hours he
hours. He
hours, he
No change is necessary.Slide85
Peer Review – Definition EssaySlide86
Peer Assignments
Peer
Peer
Devon
Unterbrink
Lindsie Landrigan
Julian Scott
Nicole Mackey
Greggory
Madaffari
Nicholas Ronan
Daniel Herrera
Jose Mejia Piovesan
Greggory
Madaffari
Sanquanita Jones
Erica Harold
Ke Xu
Isabel Torres
Jaime Williams
Dia
Shelton
Andrew Tyler
Krystin
Watkins
Martin Mejia Piovesan
Daniel Boyd
Alan Zamudio
Martin Mejia Piovesan
Antonio Parkinson
Ryan Grimes
Angelol
DorcenaSlide87
Examples of Citations
"Courage."
Dictionary.com
. Dictionary.com,
n.d.
Web. 13 Oct. 2014
.Slide88
Examples of CitationsSlide89
What do I need for the cite?
1
W
ord you looked up (this is same as title of article”
2
Name of Website
3
Date (in this case
n.d.
)
4
Medium (Web)
5
Date you accessed siteSlide90
Citing Courage Quotes by Others
1
Author of Quote
(this is same as title of article”
2
Name of Website
4 Date (in this case
n.d.
)
5 Medium (Web)
6 Date you accessed site
3
Publishing Org (
Xplore
)Slide91
Citing Courage Quotes by Others Slide92
Citing Courage Quotes by Others
http://www.notable-quotes.com/c/courage_quotes.htmlSlide93
Citing Courage Quotes by OthersSlide94
Homework
Complete Final Draft of Definition Essay
Make packet including
Rough Draft
Peer Review Sheet
Summary of Changes You Made
Final Draft Slide95
Read
75 Readings Plus
Comparison and Contrast
Bruce Catton “Grant and Lee: A Study in Contrasts”
Mark Twain’s “Two Views of Mississippi”
Suzanne Britt “Neat People vs. Sloppy People”
Bharati
Mukherjee “Two Ways to Belong in America”