12 Kenneth A Adam Kenneth is a speaker and consultant on contract drafting and author of A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting ABA 3d ed 2013 In February 2015 he will present his 145Draftin ID: 300542
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12 On the other hand, a U.S. reference work, Bryan A. Garner, Garners Dictionary of Legal 95354 (3d ed. 2011), endorses using to replace oered is perplexingSo those who wish to banish dont agree on what to use instead. That suggests that the issue is more subtle than it appears. In fact, both alternatives are problematic. instead of results in being used to express an obligation, whether its imposed on the subject of a sentence ( Kenneth A. Adam Kenneth is a speaker and consultant on contract drafting and author of A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting (ABA 3d ed. 2013). In February 2015 he will present his Drafting Clearer Contracts seminar in Australia under the auspices of Melbourne Law School. For more information, visit the Melbourne Law School website: www.law.unimelb.edu.au. Australiancorporatelawyer VOLUME 24, ISSUE 3 SEPTEMBER 2014 13 on their modernity. But its awed, as the proposed replacements themselves give rise to multiple meanings, and the broader problem remains unaddressed.Using to Mean Has a Duty ToTo address the broader problem, I have provided a comprehensive framework in my A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting, referred to as the categories of contract language. A given provision in a contract will fall into one of the categories language of obligation, discretion, prohibition, policy, and others.In that context, has a useful role to play. I recommend a disciplined use of only to impose an obligation on a contract party that is the subject of a sentence Acme shall purchase the sharesdiagnostic test for that use of the provision would still make sense if you were to replace [or havea duty . If it doesnt, you should use something . (Even if a given the has a duty test, you should also check whether the provision in question should instead be expressed as a condition.) in this manner frees up and for use in other categories of contract language. And using solely to imposean obligation on the subject of a sentence would encourage drafters to think twice before imposing the obligation on someone else. Imposing the obligation on someone other than the subject routinely results in among other problems drafters using the passive voice (The Deposit shall promptly be repaid), which at best is wordy but can also create confusion.Warnings that using can lead to litigation are overblown. Courts in all common-law jurisdictions have long acknowledged serves to express obligations. For purposes of business contracts, as opposed to statutes, I havent encountered an instance of someone arguing, even unsuccessfully, that instead of expressing an obligation, a particular is directory (or discretionary) and means . And when contract parties ght over a given , usually its over confusion between obligations and conditions. Getting rid of wouldnt eliminate that as a source of potential confusion.Im no dinosaur my writings show that Ive long been a critic of traditional contract usages. I recommend disciplined use of in business contracts not because Im a slave to inertia but because it oers the best way for drafters to gain control over verb structures.My recommendation is limited to business contracts. For example, I wouldnt use in consumer documents. That doesnt undercut my recommendation dierent considerations apply to dierent kinds of writing.Rehabilitating Its too pessimistic to say that disciplined use is beyond the reach of most lawyers. The test for disciplined use of use it to has a duty to is simple.In Australia, the bigger question is whether its realistic to expect individuals and organisations to reconsider their across-the-board repudiation of , given that Australian practitioners have gone further than others in purging fromtheir contracts.But that doesnt mean that the trend against is irreversible. For one thing, review ofa random assortment of Australian contracts suggests that plenty of Australian legal departments and law rms still use in contracts.Furthermore, although Modern Legal Draftingnotes that most experts in legal drafting recommend eliminating , one shouldnt feel intimidated. Good drafting practices arent subject to a vote drafters are free to do what makes most sense. Its perhaps relevant that of the three commentators cited in Legal Drafting, two dont have a background in contract drafting. Unless you work regularly with contracts, youre unlikely to appreciate that the prose of contracts is much more limited and stylised than the prose of litigation writing its analogous to software code and so dierent considerations apply.For those law departments that have decided to do without , it might be awkwardto rehabilitate it. But they should know that their simple gesture toward plain-language drafting comes at a signicant cost muddied verb structures. FootnotesSee Kenneth A. Adams, A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting ¶¶ 3.6768 (3d ed. 2013). acla.com.au VOLUME 24, ISSUE 3 SEPTEMBER 2014