Pick up your English binder Turn to Tracking My Growth in Narrative Writing W73c Pull up your personal narrative on the laptop Good News 3 rd hour is leading the English binder challenge Organized and all in place ID: 404235
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Welcome!
Pick up your English binder.
Turn to “Tracking My Growth in Narrative Writing: W73c.”
Pull up your personal narrative on the laptop.
Good News! 3
rd
hour is leading the English binder challenge! Organized and all in place.
6
th
– not well organized.
5,6,8,9 – Not all binders put away in the proper place!Slide2
Sentence Variety & Sentence Pattern 4
Sentence pattern 4 – open with an adverb
An adverb:
A
word that
changes
a verb, adjective or another adverb by telling how something is done, when something is done, where something is done, or to what extent something is done.Slide3
Now for the W73c
These adverbs are ALSO transitions!
Currently,
10. *Sleepily,
Immediately, 11. Quickly,Recently, 12. CarefullyGradually,Presently,Simultaneously,Briefly,Finally,Suddenly*Sleepily – may or may not be a transition, but will definitely work for pattern.Slide4
Your Peer’s Text
The
dog was
catching up. He bit my ankle while I was climbing up the fence. I
finally made
it out the stranger’s yard. …Finally, I made it out of the stranger’s yard.Slide5
Your Peer’s Text
Where can we add an adverb?
I
kept getting killed over and over
again.
I just wanted to throw my control out the window. I was so mad that I quit playing the game.Eventually, I was so mad that I quit playing the game.Slide6
Adding sentence pattern 4 to your writing…
Look
through your personal narrative and find a sentence that starts with
a word ending in “
ly
.”If you do not have a sentence starting with an adverb ending in "ly," then edit a sentence to begin with an adverb.Done with Pattern 4 and your story? Dialogue!Hooks! ClosingsGo to Weebly and look at more revising ideas.Final Draft – due FridaySlide7
Now for the W73c
These adverbs are ALSO transitions!
Currently,
10. *Sleepily,
Immediately, 11. Quickly,Recently, 12. CarefullyGradually,Presently,Simultaneously,Briefly,Finally,Suddenly*Sleepily – may or may not be a transition, but will definitely work for pattern.Slide8
Exit
Planner – CW: Add an adverb; HW – final draft of story due Friday at the end of class.
Put your name on a Post-It. Put your Post-It on the board.
I feel great about my story being done by Friday.
I hope my story will be done by Friday.
Friday? You can’t be serious. Log off. 9th hour – put computers away.Put away bindersSlide9
E&R
Take out a sheet of paper. Write your heading.
Write the title: Social Media Effects
After taking the quiz, write a PARAGRAPH
1
st sentence (topic sentence) – main idea of the article.Include 3 pieces of evidence from the article.Include: who, what, where, when, whyLast sentence – closing idea