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Commas, Comma Splices, and Sentence Fragments
Joan Gardner, Cara Jacobsen, and April WeissSlide2
Commas
The correct use of commas helps you communicate effectively.
In
some places, commas are required to accurately convey your
meaning….Slide3Slide4
Commas should be used to prevent confusion.
Ex.
Stop clubbing baby seals! vs. Stop clubbing, baby seals
!
Commas separate introductory words, phrases, and clauses from the rest of the sentence.
Ex.
Slowly, the baby seals realized they were in danger.
Commas separate clauses in compound sentences.
Ex.
The club was brought out, and the baby seals grew quiet.
Commas separate items in a list.
Ex.
All the baby seals—Rupert, Donald, Gertrude, and Jermaine—gave a tiny roar.Slide5
Commas can be used with dates, addresses, titles, and numbers.
Ex.
On May 19, 2525, mercury levels will rise and create a race of super baby seals.
Commas should be used with most quotations.
Ex.
“Please stop clubbing me,” said the super baby seal.
Don’t use commas excessively!
Ex.
The evil captor, kept clubbing the, super baby seal, and the super, baby, seal, attacked the man, leading an attack.
Commas separate parenthetical and transitional expressions.
Ex.
Some seals, incidentally,
continued
to revolt against their aggressive captors.Slide6
Comma Splices and Fused Sentences
Commas can be used to structure sentences and indicate natural pauses.
Without
them, you could sound like this:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=TzbUPfoveok
In order to avoid sounding like this, revise comma splices and fused sentences.Slide7
Use something more than a single comma to separate two independent clauses.
Ex.
The Micro Machines Man was popular in the 80’s, Cara is the only one who recognizes him now.
What’s the correct way to fix this?
The
Micro Machines Man was popular in the
80’s.
Cara is the only one who recognizes him now
.
The Micro Machines Man was popular in the 80’s,
but Cara
is the only one who recognizes him now
.
The Micro Machines Man was popular in the
80’s;
Cara is the only one who recognizes him now
.
Although
the
Micro Machines Man was popular in the 80’s, Cara is the only one who recognizes him now.Slide8
Use commas to fix run-on (fused) sentences
Ex.
Micro Machines were so amazing because they were so small so incredible and so durable.
Fixed:
Micro Machines were so amazing because they were so small, so incredible, and so durable.Slide9
Sentence Fragments
Sentence fragments are like comma splices, but with periods instead of commas.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=gx6TBrfCW54Slide10
Phrase fragments are dependent clauses used alone.
Ex.
I have issues. With badgers.
Be careful not to make a fragment when starting with transitions.
Ex.
Badgers have attacked many creatures. Such as cobras.
Compound-predicate fragments unnecessarily separate objects from their subjects.
Ex.
The badger attacked the cobra. And dragged it into its hole.
Dependent-clause fragments are also dependent clauses used alone.
Ex.
The badger attacked the cobra.
And was bitten.Slide11
To fix sentence fragments, combine clauses with commas or conjunctions.
Fixed examples:
I have issues with badgers.
Badgers
have attacked many
creatures, such
as cobras
.
The badger attacked the
cobra and
dragged it into its hole
.
The badger attacked the
cobra and
was bitten.
Slide12
No baby seals were harmed in the making of this PowerPoint presentation.
Unfortunately, one cobra was mauled.Slide13
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…”
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