PPT-  Editing & Revising: Approaches to Improving Paragrap

  Time4Writing provides these teachers materials to teachers and parents at no cost More presentations handouts interactive online exercises and video lessons are freely available at Time4Writingcom . The Graduate Writing Center (GWC). gwc.psu@gmail.com. Nicolette J. . Hylan. Matthew B. Price. Graduate Writing Center. One-on-one consultations. All types of writing, all stages of the process.. Hours for the coming week posted on Friday afternoons at 4 P.M. . Professional Development. Literacy Design Collaborative. Workshop Objectives. Review the LDC framework and explain how editing and revising are essential skills in the writing process.. Present the best practices for teaching . September 17, 2014. Today. Wrap-up the writing process. Memos. Review – The Writing Process. Step 1: Brainstorming & Planning. Step 2: Drafting (write a rough draft). Step 3: Revising. Step 4: Editing. Dead Words, Transitions and Comma Splices. Eliminating Dead Words. The following . Dead Words . need to be eliminated from your writing. :. HIGHLIGHT . or CIRCLE them so you know you have to replace the word. Day 1. Day 2 student and partner are peer revising.. Day 3 student is revising their own story.. Revising . Read what you have written again.. Think . about what others said about it.. Rearrange . words or sentences.. Marc I. Rosen, M.D.. Most Successful Grants are Revise and Resubmits. Initial. or Revised?. Number Applications. Success. Rate. Initial Submission. 19,259. 8.6%. Revise and Resubmit. 5,373. 37.2%. Part of Gavilan. . Writing Center’s Portfolio Series. Practical Steps to Successfully Revising Your Essay. Start with the big concerns…. …And Then Worry About Editing. Switch from Writer-Centered to Reader-Centered. Organization:Does my introduction get my readers’ attention and prepare them for what is to come?Are my paragraphs too short or too long? Are they unified, coherent, and welldeveloped? Are they Seminary Hacks. Overview. Real writing begins not with the first draft of a text, but rather with the successive revisions and rewrites of that draft, each of which clarifies and refines the argument and message. The full set of processes and actions utilized in revision are what creates real writing that is lasting and memorable. . USAID’s experience improving the quality of care in low and middle income countries. Applying Science to Strengthen and . Improve Systems (ASSIST) Project . 2. Approaches to Improving Health Care Processes (Quality). The Graduate Writing Center (GWC). gwc.psu@gmail.com. Nicolette J. . Hylan. Matthew B. Price. Graduate Writing Center. One-on-one consultations. All types of writing, all stages of the process.. Hours for the coming week posted on Friday afternoons at 4 P.M. . Eliminate flabby expressions.. Revising Tips. Wordy. Concise. at this point in time. now. due to the fact that. because. in very few cases. seldom. despite the fact that. although. feel free to. please. Revising. Revising. is finding & correcting problems with . content. ; changing the ideas in your writing to make them clearer, stronger, and more convincing.. Revising looks at the “Big Picture”—the Idea level.. Revise. vs . . Edit. Remember…this is the basis for understanding the difference between revising & editing.. ARMS. Substitute: . - trade words or . sentences. . . for others .