PPT-Revising for Elaboration and Tone

Courtney Fisher Agenda Define elaboration and tone Discuss strategies Tone in Multimedia projects Example of how to revise for elaboration and tone Guided Practice Class example of how to elaborate for elaboration and tone. The Graduate Writing Center (GWC). gwc.psu@gmail.com. Nicolette J. . Hylan. Matthew B. Price. Graduate Writing Center. One-on-one consultations. All types of writing, all stages of the process.. Hours for the coming week posted on Friday afternoons at 4 P.M. . Building Support for your Claim. So, let’s talk about the WRITING FSA. The real test is in a few short weeks! You have come a LONG WAY and I am very proud of each of you!. BUT! There is still a lot of work to do to make sure you will do your best on the test! Based on the results from the 3. Day 1. Day 2 student and partner are peer revising.. Day 3 student is revising their own story.. Revising . Read what you have written again.. Think . about what others said about it.. Rearrange . words or sentences.. Marc I. Rosen, M.D.. Most Successful Grants are Revise and Resubmits. Initial. or Revised?. Number Applications. Success. Rate. Initial Submission. 19,259. 8.6%. Revise and Resubmit. 5,373. 37.2%. An Introduction. Copyright © 2014 Write Score LLC. Identify an author’s use of . elaboration. of evidence. so that YOU can elaborate when writing an analytical essay.. Let’s warm up!. What is Elaboration?. Seminary Hacks. Overview. Real writing begins not with the first draft of a text, but rather with the successive revisions and rewrites of that draft, each of which clarifies and refines the argument and message. The full set of processes and actions utilized in revision are what creates real writing that is lasting and memorable. . . 1. Elaboration and routes to persuasion. . 2. Factors influencing degree of elaboration. . . A. Elaboration motivation. . . B. Elaboration ability. . . . . . ASKING QUESTIONS THAT LEAD TO ELABORATION. Elaboration answers questions for the reader.. Teenagers have problems. .. . What . problems?. Elaboration answers questions for the reader.. Teenagers have problems. For example, teens don’t always have enough money to buy what they want.. A HEALTH COMMUNICATION MESSAGING MODEL. . . - . Swathi . Sridhar. Outline:. Health communication through persuasion. Elaboration Likelihood Model (ELM) . The Graduate Writing Center (GWC). gwc.psu@gmail.com. Nicolette J. . Hylan. Matthew B. Price. Graduate Writing Center. One-on-one consultations. All types of writing, all stages of the process.. Hours for the coming week posted on Friday afternoons at 4 P.M. . Eliminate flabby expressions.. Revising Tips. Wordy. Concise. at this point in time. now. due to the fact that. because. in very few cases. seldom. despite the fact that. although. feel free to. please. Revising. Revising. is finding & correcting problems with . content. ; changing the ideas in your writing to make them clearer, stronger, and more convincing.. Revising looks at the “Big Picture”—the Idea level.. Building Support for your Claim. Types of Evidence-Based Elaboration. TYPE. DESCRIPTION. EXAMPLE. Explanation. Explain the evidence provided. (Often. used when a direct quote is given.). Evidence. : . Elaboration means. . . . To . tell the reader more. using. Specific words. Extensions (phrases, clauses). Onion-like layering of detail. Specific strategies, e.g., anecdotes or scenario, lists for specificity, examples, definitions, descriptions, quotations, statistics, and facts. .