PPT-Revising for Elaboration and Tone

Courtney Fisher Agenda Define elaboration and tone Discuss strategies Tone in Multimedia projects Example of how to revise for elaboration and tone Guided Practice Class example of how to elaborate for elaboration and tone. Entry Task. Pull out your personal narrative rough draft. . On the half sheet of paper, write your Sac. Heading.. . Number your paper 1 – 4. Write the name of the 4 sentence types. Define each sentence type. Day 1. Day 2 student and partner are peer revising.. Day 3 student is revising their own story.. Revising . Read what you have written again.. Think . about what others said about it.. Rearrange . words or sentences.. Seminary Hacks. Overview. Real writing begins not with the first draft of a text, but rather with the successive revisions and rewrites of that draft, each of which clarifies and refines the argument and message. The full set of processes and actions utilized in revision are what creates real writing that is lasting and memorable. . . 1. Elaboration and routes to persuasion. . 2. Factors influencing degree of elaboration. . . A. Elaboration motivation. . . B. Elaboration ability. . . . . . Five strategies for encouraging more effective independent study. CHUNKING. QUIZZING. ELABORATION. SPACING. METACOGNITION. 2. 1. 3. 4. 5. #1 Quizzing. What is quizzing and why does it work?. What does quizzing look like?. What is Mood?. How are Tone and Mood Effective in Writing?. WHAT IS MOOD?. Mood is the general atmosphere created by the author’s words. . It is the feeling the reader gets from reading those words. . The Graduate Writing Center (GWC). gwc.psu@gmail.com. Nicolette J. . Hylan. Matthew B. Price. Graduate Writing Center. One-on-one consultations. All types of writing, all stages of the process.. Hours for the coming week posted on Friday afternoons at 4 P.M. . (Think about how it is different than a persuasive essay…). Expository Essay . Elaboration Strategies. Introductions, Body Paragraphs, and Conclusions. Expository Intros. Quotations. Scenarios/Anecdotes. author’s attitude toward the writing . (his characters, the situation) and the readers. A work of writing can have more than one tone. An example of tone could be both serious and humorous. Tone is set by the setting, choice of vocabulary and other details. . Elaboration means. . . . To . tell the reader more. using. Specific words. Extensions (phrases, clauses). Onion-like layering of detail. Specific strategies, e.g., anecdotes or scenario, lists for specificity, examples, definitions, descriptions, quotations, statistics, and facts. . What is Mood?. How are Tone and Mood Effective in Writing?. WHAT IS MOOD?. Mood is the general atmosphere created by the author’s words. . It is the feeling the reader gets from reading those words. . Tone: The . writer’s . attitude towards the subject of the piece, the audience, and self. Also known as, the . way . feelings are expressed. . Conveyed through the use of:. Diction (the words that the author uses in his/her writing). Revise. vs . . Edit. Remember…this is the basis for understanding the difference between revising & editing.. ARMS. Substitute: . - trade words or . sentences. . . for others . Bell . Ringer. :. When you think of the word. . home. what images come to mind? What other words come to mind?. Connotation & Denotation. Define. Connotation/Denotation of Animals. Connotation/Denotation of Sports Teams. .