PPT-Revising for Clarity

Day 1 Day 2 student and partner are peer revising Day 3 student is revising their own story Revising Read what you have written again Think about what others said about it Rearrange words or sentences. Please contact the CLARITY Education Manager Dr Kristin Engberg directly engbergstanfordedu cc PI Karl Deisseroth deisserostanfordedu with any further questions x day training workshops will be offered every other week starting in l ate June 2013 May 2010. 2. ARSC Clarity Project. Background. ASB approved its clarity project in August 2007. Goals:. Address concerns over length and complexity of standards. Make standards easier to read, understand and implement. The Graduate Writing Center (GWC). gwc.psu@gmail.com. Nicolette J. . Hylan. Matthew B. Price. Graduate Writing Center. One-on-one consultations. All types of writing, all stages of the process.. Hours for the coming week posted on Friday afternoons at 4 P.M. . Marc I. Rosen, M.D.. Most Successful Grants are Revise and Resubmits. Initial. or Revised?. Number Applications. Success. Rate. Initial Submission. 19,259. 8.6%. Revise and Resubmit. 5,373. 37.2%. Seminary Hacks. Overview. Real writing begins not with the first draft of a text, but rather with the successive revisions and rewrites of that draft, each of which clarifies and refines the argument and message. The full set of processes and actions utilized in revision are what creates real writing that is lasting and memorable. . Video wall customers in visualization and conference rooms are looking to expand their collaboration capabilities. Digital signage customers are looking to engage and interact better with their customers. Business Writing Is…. Purposeful. Persuasive. Economical. Reader-oriented. It is concise and doesn’t waste the reader’s time.. It focuses on the receiver, not the sender.. It conveys information and solves problems.. David Griesinger. David Griesinger Acoustics, Cambridge, Massachusetts, USA. www.davidgriesinger.com. Introduction: What is Clarity?. Clarity and direct sound are key to this talk, but I propose:. But we don’t know how to define clarity.. The Graduate Writing Center (GWC). gwc.psu@gmail.com. Nicolette J. . Hylan. Matthew B. Price. Graduate Writing Center. One-on-one consultations. All types of writing, all stages of the process.. Hours for the coming week posted on Friday afternoons at 4 P.M. . Eliminate flabby expressions.. Revising Tips. Wordy. Concise. at this point in time. now. due to the fact that. because. in very few cases. seldom. despite the fact that. although. feel free to. please. Revising. Revising. is finding & correcting problems with . content. ; changing the ideas in your writing to make them clearer, stronger, and more convincing.. Revising looks at the “Big Picture”—the Idea level.. David Griesinger. David Griesinger Acoustics. www.davidgriesinger.com. 617 331 8985. Let’s start with the . conclusions. ISO3382 analyses for Clarity are based on obsolete theories of hearing. The evolution of the ear and brain demands that the direct sound be audible.. Business Writing Is…. Purposeful. Persuasive. Economical. Reader-oriented. It is concise and doesn’t waste the reader’s time.. It focuses on the receiver, not the sender.. It conveys information and solves problems.. Revise. vs . . Edit. Remember…this is the basis for understanding the difference between revising & editing.. ARMS. Substitute: . - trade words or . sentences. . . for others .