PPT-Effective Sentences

Models for Writers Chapter 9 Six ways to use sentence variety Subordination Periodic and loose sentences Dramatically short sentences Active and passive voice For Sentence Emphasis Coordination. Choppy sentences are sentences that are too short and often repeat the same words They should be combined to make longer sen tences For example I like dogs Dogs make good pets Dogs are friendly and loyal They sentences do not have good style Readin 1. “When I get angry, Mr. . Bigglesworth. gets upset. And when Mr. . Bigglesworth. gets upset, people die!”. 2. “Searching for a boy in high school is as useless as searching for meaning in a . It was late . but. she wasn’t tired.. People like jogging because it helps them get fit.. The dog lay in the sun . although. it was hot.. 13. Preposition Sentences. On. the wall, hung a large mirror.. There are only 5 key elements to remember:. 1. . One Main Idea. 2. . Topic . Sentence. 3. 5-7 . Supporting Sentences. 4. . Closing/Transition . Sentence. 5. . Mechanics. 1. One Main Idea. Identify a specific topic to write about. Pick out the most effective word(s) from the given words to fill in the blank to make the sentence meaningfully complete.(6-8)Fate smiles ...... those who untiringly grapple with stark realities of li Abstr. a. cts. T. h. a. n. k. s. . t. o. . Ca. r. o. li. n. a. . Livi. . a. n. d. . B. ill. . He. n. d. ri. c. so. n. . o. f. . t. h. e . U. T. H. S. C. S. A. . f. o. r. . or. i. g. i. n. a. Sentence Structure. Simple Sentences. Successive short, . simple sentences. produce a choppy effect and indicate immaturity.. I want this. Not that. Right now.. . Complex Sentences. Long, . complex sentences. Rubric. Name:. Period:. Title:. A Person I Admire. Type:. . Personal . Essay. Length: Multiple Paragraphs. Writing Process Rubric. Prewriting. . brainstorms and plans writing . . Rough Draft Writing. Models for Writers – Chapter 9. Six ways to use sentence variety. Subordination. Periodic and loose sentences. Dramatically short sentences. Active and passive voice. For Sentence Emphasis:. Coordination. Name:. Period:. Title:. . Type:. . Expository. Length: Multiple Paragraphs. Writing Process Rubric. Prewriting. . brainstorms and plans writing . . Rough Draft Writing. . uses plan to generate rough draft. mins. ) Please write your responses in your composition book.. 1. I went to the mall, for I bought a lot of shoes.. 2. I love to eat cake, and I do not like icing.. 3. You shouldn’t skip breakfast, so should you skip lunch.. A . run-on. is two or more complete sentences that are not properly joined or separated.. Run-ons are usually the result of haste. . Two Kinds of Run-ons:. One kind is made up of two or more sentences run together without any punctuation between them.. 301.1.6. 401.1.6. 501.1.5. What Do You Notice?. Nick Allen had plenty of ideas, and he knew what to do with them.. . Andrew Clements, . Frindle. Nick Allen had plenty of ideas. , . and. . he knew what to do with them. simple, compound, . comples. Simple Sentences. It expresses a single complete thought that can stand on its own. . A . simple sentence contains a subject and a verb. .. EXAMPLES. . . The baby cried for food.