Liam Chris and Jack Starter In pairs discuss what is odd about this picture What is missing Brendon Gallacher He was seven and I was six my Brendon Gallacher He was Irish and I was Scottish my Brendon Gallacher ID: 313421
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Brendon Gallacher
Liam, Chris and JackSlide2
Starter
In pairs
discuss what is odd about this picture? What is missing?Slide3
Brendon Gallacher
He was seven and I was six, my Brendon Gallacher.
He was Irish and I was Scottish, my Brendon Gallacher.
His father was in prison; he was a cat burglar.
My father was a Communist Party full-time worker.
He had six brothers and I had one, my Brendon
Gallacher
.
He would hold my hand and take me by the river
where we’d talk all about his family being poor.
He’d get his mum out of Glasgow when he got older.
A wee holiday some place nice. Some place far.
I’d tell my mum about my Brendon Gallacher.
How his mum drank and his daddy was a cat burglar.
And she’d say, ‘Why not have him round to dinner?
’No, no, I’d say, he’s got big holes in his trousers.
I like meeting him by the burn in the open air.
Then one day after we’d been friends for two years,
one day when it was pouring and I was indoors,
my mum says to me, ‘I was talking to Mrs Moir
who lives next door to your Brendon Gallacher.
Didn’t you say his address was 24 Novar?
She says there are no Gallachers at 24 Novar.
There never have been any Gallachers next door.
’And he died then, my Brendon Gallacher,
flat out on my bedroom floor, his spiky hair,
his impish grin, his funny, flapping ear.
Oh Brendon. Oh my Brendon
Gallacher
.
-Jackie KaySlide4
He
was
seven
and I
was
six
,
my Brendon Gallacher.He was Irish and I was Scottish, my Brendon Gallacher. His father was in prison; he was a cat burglar.My father was communist party full-time worker.He had six brothers and I had one, my Brendon Gallacher
Contrast ‘he’ and ‘I’
Contrasting lives
Repetition, like a song refrain
Possessive pronouns-> he is only hers
His life is all a fantasy yet she gives very specific details about it to make him seem real
Childish termSlide5
He would
hold my hand
and
take me by the river
where we'd talk all about his family being poor.
He'd
get his mum out of Glasgow
when he got older.A wee holiday some place nice. Some place far.I'd tell my mum about my Brendon Galacher. Innocent relationshipHe appears to be in chargeJackie Kay got HER family out of GlasgowColloquial, ScottishTo shock her mother? For attention?
Nice, thoughtful characterSlide6
How his
mum drank
and his
daddy
was a cat burglar
.
And she'd say, 'why not have him round to dinner?‘
No, no, I'd say he's got big holes in his trousers.I like meeting him by the burn in the open air. Then one day after we'd been friends for two years Making his family sound more exciting ChildishRomantic life of a drinker
Direct
Conversation
Humorous, small problem compared to life of parents
Indicates change in mood
ColloquialSlide7
One day
when it was
pouring
and I was indoors,
my mum
says
to me, 'I was talking to Mrs Moir who lives next door to your Brendon Gallacher Didn't you say his address was 24 Novar?She says there are no Gallachers at 24 Novar Repetition from last line of previous stanza-> tensionPathetic FallacyTrappedPresent tense, reliving the eventOnly exists for herQuestion, chance to admit the truthSlide8
There
never
have been any
Gallachers
next door.'
And he
died then
, my Brendon Gallacher,flat out on my bedroom floor, his spiky hair,his impish grin, his funny flapping ear.Oh Brendon. Oh my Brendon Gallacher Direct dialogue-> to shock the readerCan’t exit as mother has proved that he doesn’tTo her he IS dead
Fond memories
Mourning and loss, emphasised by ‘Oh’
Only her imaginationSlide9
Jackie Kay
Jackie Kay was born in Edinburgh, Scotland in 1961 to a Scottish mother and a Nigerian father
.
She was adopted by a white couple at birth and was brought up in Glasgow
.
Her
poems reflect her own life (autobiographical)She left Scotland partly because of her feeling that she wanted a more accepting environment for her son, Matthew, who was born in 1988.Slide10
Synopsis
Brendon Gallacher is a poem about belief in imaginary friends, who are fictional beings conjured from the mind often to provide companionship to a lonely individual. The poem advances through the stages of a child’s belief of her friend, and although she begins having full faith in his existence, she is later forced to give up on her belief as the reality of the situation collapses upon her, and she realises that she must give up her childish belief of an imaginary friend. This is also evidently progressing through her mind as she refuses to have Brendon over for dinner, knowing that she cannot prove his existence.Slide11
Structure of the poem
The poem's structure is quite simple; 5 stanzas, all 5 lines which are roughly the same length, except the last two stanzas which are shorter. The stanzas slowly diminishing could reflect the exposure and
‘death’
of
Brendon Gallacher.Slide12
Character and Voice
In the poem the young girl and her mother are the only ones who talk.
Brendon
has a described character, but no voice. The fact that we don't get a voice from
Brendon
almost foreshadows his
non-existence,
and near the end of the poem, reinforces the idea that Brendon Gallacher is an imaginary friend.Slide13
Poetic Devices Used
ALLITERATION -The poem is alliterative through it’s use of phrases like “by the burn”, giving it a spoken-style rhythm.
CAESURA -The poem used caesuras to separate the repeated phrase “my Brendon Gallacher” as well as to display contrast between the two characters.
RHYME -Rhyming is attempted through assonant phrases at the end of the matched lines in each stanza as “1 & 2” and “3 & 4”.
ENJAMBMENT -Enjambment at the beginning of the second stanza simulates the flowing of the river through the flow of the river.