draftietfnetmodarch04txt IETF77 Phil Shafer lt philjunipernet gt Comments and Feedback Few comments on previous draft revisions Mainly requesting that sections be removed Last Call yielded more comments ID: 658671
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NETMOD Architecture Draftdraft-ietf-netmod-arch-04.txtIETF77
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Comments and FeedbackFew comments on previous draft revisionsMainly requesting that sections be removed
Last Call yielded more comments
Mainly saying the content was not correct
No clear storyline
Fragmented
Not addressing the chartered item
WG goals for this document are not clearly definedSlide3
WG GoalsWhat does the WG want in the draft?Architecture means:What problem you are solving
How the individual pieces of the solution work
How
they fit together
How you build something with themSlide4
Second AttemptRewrite with new focus:(a) why we did it // the problem domain
(
b
) what we did // how the moving parts work
(
c
) how you use it // what a yang-based solution looks like
(
d
) real world issues // minor bits that need to be written downSlide5
Changes from -03 to -04.txtNew text on many issuesNew organizationMore complete “overview” material
Discuss IAB NM WS issues and how they are addressed
Reworked text to add better storyline
Fixed issues from
Juergen’s
reviewSlide6
New draft: draft-ietf-netmod-arch-04.txtNew Outline:
Origins of YANG
Elements of YANG
Working with YANG
Modeling Considerations
Doubled in lengthSlide7
New draft: draft-ietf-netmod-arch-04.txtSlipped in before the draft cut-off
(with 1.5 hrs to spare)
Missing two sections
Proposed contents posted to the mailing list
Will be in the post-IETF77 revisionSlide8
But the question remains:Does this new revision address the content the WG has in mind?
What
is missing?
Please
read
the post-IETF draft
Please send comments