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Write a bullet point summary of Like the Sun by R K Narayan Write for fifteen minutes You should have at least 810 sentencespoints Use characters names and details Note I will not stamp your work if you do not include the above requirements If you want to be better writers it sta ID: 806614

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Writing Lab Week: Day 1

Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Slide2

Write a bullet point summary of “Like the Sun” by R. K. Narayan. Write for fifteen minutes. You should have at least 8-10 sentences/points. Use characters names and details.

Note: I will not stamp your work if you do not include the above requirements. If you want to be better writers, it starts today with hard work and FOCUS.

BELLWORK 9/6/16

Name, Period Number, Date!

Slide3

Start with the Prompt! What is the question asking you to do?

Writing the introduction with a clear, meaningful thesis statement will create a map of where your paper will take me.

Slide4

Here is the prompt. . . With your group, write down and highlight the key components of what you must answer.

Both Narayan and Saki use irony or paradox to explain ideas. In an essay, compare and contrast how the authors present the concepts of truth and deception in these stories. Provide evidence from the text to support your understanding.

Identify a few examples of irony or paradox in each story.

Draw a conclusion about the message each writer is expressing about truth, deception, and honesty.

Take notes on how the use of irony and paradox help each writer express his message. Find quotations from the text that you can include to support your ideas.

Slide5

What did your group highlight?

Both Narayan and Saki use irony or paradox to explain ideas. In an essay,

compare

and

contrast

how the authors present

the concepts of truth and deception

in these stories. Provide

evidence

from the text to support your understanding.

Identify

a few examples of irony or paradox

in each story.

Draw a conclusion about the message each writer is expressing about truth, deception, and honesty.

Take notes on how the use of irony and paradox help each writer express his message.

Find quotations from the text that you can include to support your ideas.

Slide6

What is the question asking you to do?

Compare

and contrast how the authors present the concepts of truth and deception in these stories.

Slide7

What is the question asking you to do?

Identify

and

write down three

examples

of irony or paradox in

the stories.

Dramatic Irony

A plot device to create situations where the reader knows much more about the episodes and the resolutions before the chief character or characters. 

Situational Irony

Situational irony occurs when the final outcome is contradictory to what was expected.

Verbal Irony

Verbal irony occurs when speakers say the opposite of what they mean.

Paradox

A concept that seems absurd or contradictory, yet is true. The uniqueness of paradoxes lies in the fact that a deeper level of meaning and significance is not revealed at first glace, but when it does crystallize, it provides astonishing insight

.

Slide8

What is the question asking you to do?

Identify a few examples of irony or paradox in each story.

“Like the Sun” by R. K. Narayan

Paradox:

“Truth,

Sekhar

reflected, is like the sun. I suppose no human being can ever look it straight in the face without blinking or being dazed” (191). Narayan is suggesting that truth hurts sometimes, and even if we ask for it and believe we want to hear it, we react negatively with hurt feelings.

“The Open Window” by Saki

Irony:

Mr. Nuttel is prescribed rest and relaxation in the countryside by his doctor. His nerves are completely shot, and the niece of the estate, knowing of Mr. Nuttel’s ignorance of the family, fabricates a story about the tragic death of her aunt’s husband, two brothers, and favorite hunting dog. When the hunting party returns to the window left open for them, Mr. Nuttel runs in complete horror believing he had witnessed the return of ghosts. The irony is that the “peaceful countryside” was exactly the opposite of what his doctor had ordered.

Slide9

What is the question asking you to do?

With your group, identify one more example of irony or paradox from each story.

“Like the Sun” by R. K. Narayan

Example:

Is it irony or paradox?

“The Open Window” by Saki

Example:

Is it irony or paradox?

Slide10

What is the question asking you to do?

Draw a conclusion about the message each writer is expressing about truth, deception, and honesty.

“Like the Sun” by R. K. Narayan

The author is saying…

“The Open Window” by Saki

The author is saying…

Slide11

Writing Lab Week: Day 2

Wednesday, September 7, 2016

Slide12

Write a bullet point summary of “The Open Window” by Saki. Write for fifteen minutes. You should have at least 8-10 sentences/points. Use characters names and details.

Note: I will not stamp your work if you do not include the above requirements. If you want to be better writers, it starts today with hard work and FOCUS.

BELLWORK 9/7/16

Name, Period Number, Date!

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Let’s look at the authors’ messages that we wrote down yesterday…

Draw a conclusion about the message each writer is expressing about truth, deception, and honesty.

“Like the Sun” by R. K. Narayan

The author is saying…

“The Open Window” by Saki

The author is saying…

Slide14

What is the question asking you to do?

Draw a conclusion about the message each writer is expressing about truth, deception, and honesty.

“Like the Sun” by R. K. Narayan

Narayan believes that truth can set us free and teach us valuable lessons, like not wasting money on music lessons. Life is best-lived when a person is honest.

“The Open Window” by Saki

In a much less serious tone, Saki celebrates the inherent creativity and humor that exists in deception through Vera’s tale telling. Not only does she make up a story that completely fools a grown man, but she also avoids potential punishment for the lie by fabricating the story of Mr. Nuttel’s fear of dogs so that her aunt will not wonder why he left so abruptly. The teenager appears clever and the audience finds her antics humorous and charming.

Slide15

Using this information, write a thesis statement addressing the writing prompt:

In an essay, compare and contrast how Narayan and Saki present the concepts of truth and deception in “Like the Sun” and “The Open Window.”

Slide16

Let’s take a look at the thesis statements and provide feedback…

Slide17

Sample thesis statement that I developed…

Narayan believes that truth can set us free and teach us valuable lessons, while in a much less serious tone, Saki celebrates the inherent creativity and humor in deception.

Slide18

Open with something that will draw readers in. Sometimes, especially if the topic of your paper is somewhat dry or technical, opening with something catchy can help.

The Introduction

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Your introduction is an important road map for the rest of your paper. Your introduction conveys a lot of information to your readers. You can let them know what your topic is, why it is important, and how you plan to proceed with your discussion. In most academic disciplines, your introduction should contain a thesis that will assert your main argument. It should also, ideally, give the reader a sense of the kinds of information you will use to make that argument and the general organization of the paragraphs and pages that will follow.

The Introduction

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Consider these options:

an intriguing example

a provocative quotation that is closely related to your argumenta puzzling scenarioa vivid and perhaps unexpected anecdote

a thought-provoking question

Think of your introductory paragraph in the shape of a funnel, moving from the general background to the more specific purpose of the paper.

Slide21

Introduction:

An Old English proverb teaches us that “Honesty is the best policy,” but is that truly the case? In the short stories “Like the Sun” by R. K. Narayan and “The Open Window” by Saki, the authors explore the concepts of truth and deception through the use of irony and paradox. In the end, what they reveal is that the proverb may not actually be worth following. Ultimately, the truth causes more harm than good for

Sekhar

, and Vera’s deception entertains us by allowing us to recognize that Mr. Nuttel takes himself much too seriously.

Narayan believes that truth can set us free and teach us valuable lessons, while in a much less serious tone, Saki celebrates the inherent creativity and humor in deception.

Slide22

Planning the paper

Use the order you have established in your thesis statement. For example, my thesis mentions the Native Americans, then the Puritans, and finally, a comparison of the two. Therefore my paper will look like this:

I. Introduction

II. Paragraph analyzing Narayan’s “Like the Sun.”

III. Paragraph analyzing Saki’s “The Open Window.”

IV. A comparison of the two – what common ground they shared.

V. Conclusion

Slide23

Using your revised thesis statement, work with your group to plan your paper:

I.

II.

III.

IV.

V.

Slide24

Find quotations from the text that you can include to support your ideas.

Paragraph 2

“Like the Sun” by R. K. Narayan

Quotations:

“We must give and take absolute Truth whatever may happen. Otherwise life is not worth living” (191).

When

Sekhar

learns that he will have to grade all 100 paper in one night due to his commitment to the truth, Narayan writes, “ ‘Yes, sir,’ feeling that sitting up all night with a hundred test papers was a small price to pay for the luxury of practicing Truth” (194).

Paragraph 3

“The Open Window” by Saki

Quotations:

“ ‘Then you know practically nothing about my aunt?’ pursued

the self-possessed young lady

. . . ‘Her great tragedy happened just three years ago,’ said the child, ‘that would be since your sister’s time’ ” (196).

Her description implies the author’s admiration.

“ ‘I expect it was the spaniel, said the niece

calmly

; ‘He told me he had a horror of dogs. He was once hunted . . . by a pack of pariah dogs’ ” (198).

Slide25

Find examples from the text that you can include to support your ideas.

Paragraph 4: The Comparison – Similarities at a glance

Both stories involve an internal conflict of choosing to tell a truth or a lie.

The reader feels empathy for the headmaster and the wife for having to hear the brutal truth, and perhaps experiences the same when Mr. Nuttel is humiliated by being so gullible.

Additional info for Paragraphs 2-3:

The Contrast – Differences at a glance

Tone: Narayan is serious and contemplative, whereas Saki is witty and light-hearted.

Purpose: “Like the Sun” is philosophical in nature, while “The Open Window” is purely entertaining.

Slide26

Add the textual evidence and examples you would use for each paragraph…

II.

III.

IV.

Slide27

Writing Lab Week: Day 3

Thursday, September 8, 2016

Slide28

It’s 50 years in the future, and the world is at war. Luckily, when the nuclear bombs dropped, you had a bomb shelter under your house to hide out in. When your monitors tell you it’s safe to go outside a year later, what do you find? Who or what is still alive?

Write for ten minutes. You should have at least a full paragraph of 6-8 sentences.

BELLWORK 9/8/16

Name, Period Number, Date!

Slide29

Return to the theme or themes in the introduction. This strategy brings the reader full circle. For example, if you begin by describing a scenario, you can end with the same scenario as proof that your essay is helpful in creating a new understanding. You may also refer to the introductory paragraph by using key words or parallel concepts and images that you also used in the introduction.

The Conclusion

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Synthesize, don’t summarize: Include a brief summary of the paper’s main points, but don’t simply repeat things that were in your paper. Instead, show your reader how the points you made and the support and examples you used fit together. Pull it all together.

The Conclusion

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Beginning with an unnecessary, overused phrase such as “in conclusion,” “in summary,” or “in closing.”

Introducing a new idea or subtopic in your conclusion.

Making sentimental, emotional appeals that are out of character with the rest of an analytical paper.

The Conclusion:

Strategies to Avoid!

Slide32

Work Time!

Use the remainder of class time to work on your rough draft. You have a thesis statement, an outline for the paper, and quotations to use as evidence to support your claims. Have something ready to type tomorrow!

Slide33

Your heading goes in the upper

LEFT

hand corner:Your NameMs. Ousley

English 10

Date

REMINDER!

Slide34

Writing Lab Week: Day 4

Friday, September 9, 2016

Slide35

Both Narayan and Saki use irony or paradox to explain ideas. In an essay, compare and contrast how the authors present the concepts of truth and deception in these stories. Draw a conclusion about the message each writer is expressing about truth, deception, and honesty. Provide evidence from the text to support your understanding.

Your essay should contain a strong thesis statement and at least three body paragraphs with evidence to support your opinion. Each body paragraph should have at least one quotation from “Like the Sun” or “The Open Window.” In all, you will have five paragraphs: an introduction, three body paragraphs, and a conclusion.

Submit a hard copy before you leave class. I will meet you at the door.

Computer Lab Time