EmSAT Writing Marker Notes - PowerPoint Presentation

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EmSAT Writing Marker NotesSlide2

Issue 1: Too Short (NVS)

I high a school to work or travel but

very

……………….....................

(10 words)

Mark the writing based on any original material.

However,

short scripts

will typically

not

show

enough cohesion

,

structure or lexis to g

et

a full grade at that level.Slide3

Issue 1: Too Short (NVS) Example 2

Essay Topic:

Some people believe that zoos, where animals are kept in man-made environments, should no longer exist in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.Slide4

Issue 1: Too Short (NVS) Example 2

Many people think that animals were they keeping in the zoo will not be exist in 21 century . In my opinion

i

think they will be

exist,Other people disagree . In this essay , I will look at the both sides and I will give reason for my opinion.

I will give three main reason for my opinion. First reason is the we have a lots of animal not all of them will die .For example, if the animal get

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(80 words)

Some people believe that zoos, where animals are kept in man-made environments, should no longer exist in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

Mark original language

(excluding templates and prompts)Slide5

Issue 2: Formulaic/template text

Working part time or full time from home is one of the most hotly debated issues now

adays

and naturally there are two opposing positions Some people think that, it has positive effects on both the employer and the employee while others fear the negative effects.

As far as I am concerned, I find myself standing between the two negative and positive views.

Some people who claims is positive justify their view as

follows,working

at home partly or fully in

arelaxing

place and time will be

benficiable

for both the

emplyer

and the employee as it saves

thme

, energy, efforts and money.

On the other hand people who fear its positive effects justify their view as follows, they think that working from home has many demerits towards the family ,

comunication

and connection.

In conclusion, this issue is a mixed blessing one and we should benefit from its merits and work carefully to avoid its demeritsSlide6

Issue 2: Formulaic/template text

Working part time or full time from home

is one of the most hotly debated issues now

adays

and naturally there are two opposing positions Some people think that, it has positive effects on both

the employer and the employee

while others fear the negative effects.

As far as I am concerned, I find myself standing between the two negative and positive views.

Some people who claims is positive justify their view as

follows,

working

at home partly or fully in

arelaxing

place and time will be

benficiable for both the emplyer and the employee as it saves thme, energy, efforts and money.On the other hand people who fear its positive effects justify their view as follows, they think that working from home has many demerits towards the family , comunication and connection.In conclusion, this issue is a mixed blessing one and we should benefit from its merits and work carefully to avoid its demerits

Try to mark based on whatever original material is present. Slide7

Issue 3: Autotext

flights with airline companies in some countries had become much cheaper and it is a good and butter for the people who is going to travelers to this countries and who want travel from the this countries. It butter for people who travel with family and friends easily.

Negative think is people will make traffic.

However, I think my discuss is a positive because of the less spending on flights Tackett.

The fact that I have a great way of saying it would mean so much better if it was a little bit more of a new one and only one that I can get it together for me to be able too see it as a result of an old friend is a good time waster for me a lot of fun with this countries in Asia and the first place for me to get my money on this one was hurt and I'm not sure what I do is a good day for a long way day and I don't think it's time for me and I love it and I don't have a good time with a new phone and it was not clear how many times you have no idea what to say it was a good time with a new phone case you want me too I don't think that it is a good day for you guys

Try to mark based on whatever original material is present. Slide8

Issue 3: Autotext (up close)

The fact that I have a great way of saying it would mean so much better if it was a little bit more of a new one and only one that I can get it together for me to be able too see it as a result of an old friend is a good time waster for me a lot of fun with this countries in Asia and the first place for me to get my money on this one was hurt and I'm not sure what I do is a good day for a long way day and I don't think it's time for me and I love it and I don't have a good time with a new phone and it was not clear how many times you have no idea what to say it was a good time with a new phone case you want me too I don't think that it is a good day for you guys

AutoText or Predictive Text:

Watch

out for

unconnected phrases,

perfect spelling, and (occasionally)

writing in which autocorrect has been used cleverly to generate textSlide9

Issue 3: Autotext

or Spellcheck?

every one knows

thatsport

and fitness are required pupils every where like to play many kinds of of

sports like foot ball if you want to live

ahealthy

life you must practice daily exercises to have

afit

body weknow that healthy means that gives you the

ablity to understand your lessons doing well inall of the subjects so iam with playing sports to be fit but finding time to do that students must not forget their duties and separate and find the proper time for each activity spending along time in practicing outdoor activities will affet at the perform at school now i can say that sports shoud

be mandatory planning well for it so it must be

usefuland

have the benefit of all sports

It’s hard to decide. Is this original work, or good use of

autotext and spellcheck?Slide10

Issue 4: Off-Topic

Essay Topic:

Nowadays

forms of money such as credit and debit cards are becoming more popular than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this, and give examples based on your own experience.Slide11

Issue 4: Off-Topic

In the nowadays very day I'm going to the college because study and learn and the college start in 8:10 am and finish in 2pm and have 6 classes and me now in the

fawn dishing level

four after the college I go to sleep after that I go to gym every day for the sport maybe swimming pool and I have a nice day but in the weekend I travel to KSA for see the my farm and see my camel so own weekend go an own no go but in the September month I cancel for gym because I have the Falcons and every day I afternoon after the college I go to desert for my falcons and

trening

the falcon for eat and

ganas

because win time used for the falcon 20000 up

dirhams.

Nowadays forms of money such as credit and debit cards are becoming more popular than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this, and give examples based on your own experience.

Try to mark based on whatever relevant material is present. However, do not give a full mark at that level.Slide12

Issue 5: Misunderstanding of Topic

Essay Topic:

Some people say that governments should not spend money on international aid if there are poor, unemployed, or homeless people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.Slide13

Issue 5: Misunderstanding of Topic

In these day people they spend there money in

aid

too much without thinking where they spend there money .A some people say that government they should not spend money in

eid

,I

believe that good to spend money on

eid

because it make every body happy.

Many people think governments should not spend money in eid because there is poor people and homeless and unemployed people, I don't agree with these people . Because in eid every body should be happy for everyone like poor and homeless for example, last year I saw homeless man he was so happy

Some people say that governments should not spend money on international

aid

if there are poor, unemployed, or homeless people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Try to mark based on whatever language is presentSlide14

Issue 6: Copied

Essay Topic:

Some people say that governments should not spend money on international aid if there are poor, unemployed, or homeless people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.Slide15

Issue 6: Copied

Some people say that governments should not spend money on international aid if there are poor, unemployed, or homeless people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Some people say that governments should not spend money on international aid if there are poor, unemployed, or homeless people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion

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(35 words)

Some people say that governments should not spend money on international aid if there are poor, unemployed, or homeless people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Try to mark based on whatever original language is present. If

none, as in this case,

give zero.Slide16

Issue 7: Original?

Are zoos necessary today?

_____________________

since

time immemorial played a wildlife vital role in maintaining the ecological balanceand

to

meet human

needs living

..

It was there for necessary to introduce However efforts to protect wildlife at

the same time stand firmly against any breach of the b_____________________Word Count: 40

Try to mark based on whatever original language is present. If

none, as in this case,

give zero.Slide17

Issue 7: Copied

Many people say , In some countries Nowadays forms of money such as credit and debit cards

are becoming

more popular than banknotes and coins .

with the technological advancements in the banking system , nowadays people are presented

with numerous

ways of paying for purchases . It is often said that electronically operated banking cards

will displace

the use of paper money and coins

.

There are various advantages of modren monetary exchange . Firstly , it is now increasingly common for people to shop online where they cannot use paper money and coins to pay. thus,people eventually embrace the modren method of payment to be able to participate in online commerce

.

Secondly

, the security features of credit cards and online method of monetary exchange give

authorities the

power to follow people .Click to visit a probable source:Slide18
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Issue 7: Copied

Are cheap flights a good thing?

Click to visit a probable source:Slide20
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Other issues?

Be aware of the range of students that will take this test – from A1 right up to C2. Don’t expect all to be at B1 or B1+ level!

Watch out for patterns in a group of essays.

If you suspect a script or are aware of an issue, write a comment and let us know

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