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Integrated English WritingSlide2

AttendancePlease raise

your hand

and say “HERE!”Slide3

Please turn in your homework assignments!Slide4

Can you guess what’s next?

That’s right!

It’s time for a …

POP QUIZ!!!Slide5

What does the word “résumé” mean in French?

Write the answer.

Question #1Slide6

What does the acronym “CV” stand for?

Write the answer.

Question #2Slide7

What does the acronym “BA” stand for?

Write the answer.

Question #3Slide8

What does the acronym “GPA” stand for?

Write the answer.

Question #4Slide9

What does the acronym “TOEIC” stand for?

Write the answer.

Question #5Slide10

Complete the sentence.__________ to a survey carried out by

Lotte

Department Store, …

Question #6Slide11

Complete the sentence.25,000 customers _______ _______ in this survey.

Question #7Slide12

Complete the sentence.The __________ by which the department store was judged included quality of merchandise, shopping atmosphere, and sufficient number of checkouts.

Question #8Slide13

Complete the sentence.Customers were most __________ _______ the quality of merchandize and pleasant shopping atmosphere.

Question #9Slide14

Rewrite this sentence using a relative clause

.

The results produced by the survey show that 30% of customers felt the department store needs more checkouts.

Question #10Slide15

What does the word “résumé” mean in French?

Write the answer.

Question #1

summarySlide16

What does the acronym “CV” stand for?

Write the answer.

Question #2

Curriculum VitaeSlide17

What does the acronym “BA” stand for?

Write the answer.

Question #3

Bachelor of ArtsSlide18

What does the acronym “GPA” stand for?

Write the answer.

Question #4

Grade Point AverageSlide19

What does the acronym “TOEIC” stand for?

Write the answer.

Question #5

Test of English for

International CommunicationSlide20

Complete the sentence.__________ to a survey carried out by

Lotte

Department Store, …

Question #6

AccordingSlide21

Complete the sentence.25,000 customers _______ _______ in this survey.

Question #7

took partSlide22

Complete the sentence.The __________ by which the department store was judged included quality of merchandise, shopping atmosphere,

and sufficient number of checkouts.

Question #8

criteriaSlide23

Complete the sentence.Customers were most __________ _______ the quality of merchandize and pleasant shopping atmosphere.

Question #9

satisfied withSlide24

Rewrite this sentence using a relative clause

.

The results produced by the survey show that 30% of customers felt the department store needs more checkouts.

Question #10

The results, which were produced by the survey, show that 30% of customers felt the department store needs more checkouts.Slide25

Unit 11: This is the course for me

Task

: Write a personal statement

Pages: 52-55Slide26

Get ready to write

Writing a personal statement – 10 tips

Page 52Slide27

General Advice

2. Practice

3. keep4. Make

5. Sell

Specific Advice

6. Start / Show / Refer

7. Mention

8. Write / include

9. list / explain / gained

10. state / attendingSlide28

Personal Statement ExamplePage 52, Part 1Slide29

Personal Statement ExamplePage 54, Part 2Slide30

Personal Statement ExamplePage 54, Part 3Slide31

8 Spelling Errors + 1 Capitalization Error

satisfing

 satisfying

badmington

 badminton

acompanied

 accompanied

coarse  course

influensed

 influenced

recieved

 received

concious

 conscious

relavant

 relevant

edinburgh

 Edinburgh

5 Grammar Errors

undertaken

 undertook

specialize for  specialize in

There is  There are

to the full  to the fullest

The emphasis on … have  The emphasis on … hasSlide32

Focus on …Writing complex sentences

Page 54Slide33

Short sentences  Complex sentence

I think I am well suited to a career in law because I enjoy studying social issues in today’s society, and I believe that I have the skill to use factual evidence to present a persuasive argument.

I think my contributions to class discussions have improved, probably due to the fact that I have developed my knowledge of the subject, which has in turn made me more confident about speaking in front of the whole class.

My personal experience of journalism started when, as a young child, my father took me with him when he went to interview people for articles he wrote for a magazine.Slide34

Write a Personal StatementWriting Assignment

Scenario

: Pretend that you are going to graduate from

Dongguk

University at the end of this semester. Choose a graduate degree program at another university that you would like to apply to.

MA = Master of Arts

MS = Master of Science

MBA = Master of Business Administration

JD =

Juris

Doctor (law degree)

PhD = Doctor of PhilosophySlide35

Write a Personal StatementPage 55, Part 7

Paragraph 1

:

Why are you applying to the university?

Paragraph 2

:

What academic qualifications or experience do you have that make you a suitable applicant for this graduate program?

Paragraph 3

:

What interests or hobbies do you have that are relevant to the degree?

Paragraph 4

:

What do you hope to gain by earning a masters degree from the university?Slide36

Paragraph #1: Reason for application

Earning a

JD

from

Harvard University

is a life-long dream of mine.

I have been interested in the study of

criminal law

since I was

a high school student

.

Your

JD

program is very appealing to me because of its

high academic standards

and

practical teaching methods.

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Paragraph #2: Qualifications and experience

My undergraduate degree, a

BA

in

law

, involved participating in mock trials

and

doing legal research

.

As an undergraduate student in the

Department of Law

, I learned about … / studied … / did research on … / did volunteer work for … / did an internship at …

I am confident that my academic background in

law

will allow me to contribute immensely to your program.

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Paragraph #3: Interests and hobbies

In addition to my academic studies, I have a number of interests, including

traveling

and

watching American TV dramas

.

I possess a wide variety of interests, such as

keeping up to date with current events

and

writing articles about legal issues

.

Volunteering in my local community

has always been a passion of mine.

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Paragraph #4: What do you hope to gain?

By attending your program, I am positive that I can increase my knowledge of

international law

.

With a

JD

from

Harvard University

, I will be able to gain both practical skills and theoretical knowledge related to

law

.

As a proud graduate of

Harvard Law School

, I will possess the knowledge and skills necessary to

tackle any trade disputes that may

arrise

between Korea and the United States.

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Homework

Finish writing your

personal statement

. Then,

type

it, print it, and

bring

it to class next week.Slide41

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