Advanced Leaders Course POEM I HAVE A SPELLING CHECKER IT CAME WITH MY PC IT PLAINLY MARKS FOUR MY REVUE MISTAKES I CANNOT SEA IVE RUN THIS POEM THRU IT IM SURE YOUR PLEASE TO NO ITS LETTER PERFECT IN ITS WEIGH ID: 667605
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Write Effectively
SSI Noncommissioned Officer Academy
Advanced Leaders CourseSlide2
POEM
I HAVE A SPELLING CHECKER
IT CAME WITH MY PC;IT PLAINLY MARKS FOUR MY REVUEMISTAKES I CANNOT SEA.I’VE RUN THIS POEM THRU IT.
I’M SURE YOUR PLEASE TO NO.
ITS LETTER PERFECT IN ITS WEIGH,
MY CHECKER TOLLED ME SEW.
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Learning Objective
Action: Write Effectively Using the Army Writing Program
Condition: Given adequate time in an academic course, a requirement to communicate using the universal intellectual standards, and access to level resources with an awareness of the Operational Environment (OE) variables and actors.Standard: Writing includes:1. Elements of the six step writing process.2. Style that meets Army writing requirements of AR 25-50, DA Pam 600-67 and DA Memo 25-52 3.
3. Identification of appropriate usage of active voice.
4. Composition of correspondence with substance that supports the purpose of effective writing.
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“Effective Army writing transmits a clear message in a single, rapid reading, and is generally free of errors in grammar, mechanics, and usage.”
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Effective Army WritingSlide5
Step 1 - Understand your writing task and
your writing
conditions
Step 2 - Gather and organize your ideas
Step 3 - Write a complete draft
Step 4 - Edit your draft ruthlessly
Step 5 - Fight for feedback
Step 6 - Go final and proof it
The Six-Step Writing
Process
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Seven Rules Of
The Army Writing Style
Rule 1: Put your main point up front (BLUF)Rule 2: Write short paragraphs. No more than one inch deep or six lines longRule
3: Write short staff papers (one to two pages long)
Rule
4: Use active voice
Rule
5: Use short, conventional words
Rule
6: Write short sentences (about 15 words average)
Rule
7: Be correct, be credible, be complete
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Types of Army
Correspondence & DocumentsMemorandum
LetterOPORD (Operations Order)SOP (Standard Operating Procedures)DA and DD FormsEmail
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The Army’s main format for preparing correspondence
The Basic or Formal Memorandum
The Informal
Memorandum
The Memorandum For
Record
The
Memorandum of Agreement
(
or Understanding
)
The Memorandum
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Active / Passive Voice
ACTIVE
- The subject of the sentence names the actor ACTIVE = DOER --- VERB --- RECEIVERAll qualifiers will zero their weapons before qualification.
PASSIVE
-
The subject of the sentence names the receiver of the action.
PASSIVE = RECEIVER ---VERB --- DOER
All weapons will be zeroed before qualification.
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Active Voice Is More Effective
Because …
It is a stronger form of expression because it indicates the agent and shows the action. It states the action in fewer words.
It
prevents confusion about the actor. Use of “I” and “We; the first person takes responsibility for the action.
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Disadvantages Of Using
Passive Voice
Leaves critical information unstated Evades responsibility Increases
length
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How To Recognize The
Passive Voice
BEAMISAREWASWERE
BEING
BEEN
PAST PARTICIPLE
ENDING IN –ED OR
–EN
GIVEN
TAKEN
IMPLEMENTED
CONDUCTED
ORDERED
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How To Correct Passive Voice
1. Put the doer before the verb. Appropriate clothing will BE WORN by all personnel.
All
personnel will wear appropriate clothing.
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2. Drop
part of the verb.
The
S
oldier
WAS TRANSFERRED
to
Fort
Bragg.
He
transferred to
Fort
Bragg.
3. Change
the verb.
Personnel
are prohibited
from smoking during refueling operations.
Personnel
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Substance
Content must be relevant to the subjectInclude all information needed to communicate
Sufficient detail to be understoodKeep audience in mindIdentify and document borrowed ideas or information
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Organization
IntroductionInto topic, tell why it’s importantPurpose
Provides information, guidance, or requests decisionMain BodyIdentify main pointsUse supporting evidenceAnalysis of supporting evidenceConclusionSummary, last chance to restate position or convince
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Information Paper
Purpose- to provide informationB
ottom Line Up Front- BLUFOne page summaryClear, concise, and logical
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CloserSlide18
Practical Exercise
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Log on to the following website to complete the Practical Exercise. You have 30 minutes.
http://www.ssi.army.mil/Courses/AGS/PE/TechnicalWriting/index.html