PPT-Revising/Editing

Say Mean Matter Paragraphs Format Review Say Mean Matter This is a direct quote of what the text says What does the text say What happened Must cite text have a leadin introducing the quote or paraphrase. Ben Airth, CSI Program Manager. California Center for Sustainable Energy. Revising CSI Cost Data Reporting. 2. Since program inception, the CSI Program has looked at cost data via $/Watt. CSI Residential Third Party Owned Systems. Professional Development. Literacy Design Collaborative. Workshop Objectives. Review the LDC framework and explain how editing and revising are essential skills in the writing process.. Present the best practices for teaching . Day 1. Day 2 student and partner are peer revising.. Day 3 student is revising their own story.. Revising . Read what you have written again.. Think . about what others said about it.. Rearrange . words or sentences.. Part of Gavilan. . Writing Center’s Portfolio Series. Practical Steps to Successfully Revising Your Essay. Start with the big concerns…. …And Then Worry About Editing. Switch from Writer-Centered to Reader-Centered. http://heimshelp.education.gov.au/sites/heimshelp/support/pages/webinar-revising-your-data. Why revise data?. How do you revise . your data. ? . what . data you can correct. key elements. variation reason codes. The Writing Process. Mary Ellen . Guffey. & Dana Loewy, Essentials of Business Communication, 9th Edition. Chapter . 4, . Slide . 2. Phase 3 of the Writing Process. Mary Ellen . Guffey. & Dana Loewy, Essentials of Business Communication, 9th Edition. Business Writing Is…. Purposeful. Persuasive. Economical. Reader-oriented. It is concise and doesn’t waste the reader’s time.. It focuses on the receiver, not the sender.. It conveys information and solves problems.. The Graduate Writing Center (GWC). gwc.psu@gmail.com. Nicolette J. . Hylan. Matthew B. Price. Graduate Writing Center. One-on-one consultations. All types of writing, all stages of the process.. Hours for the coming week posted on Friday afternoons at 4 P.M. . Revising. Revising. is finding & correcting problems with . content. ; changing the ideas in your writing to make them clearer, stronger, and more convincing.. Revising looks at the “Big Picture”—the Idea level.. Business Writing Is…. Purposeful. Persuasive. Economical. Reader-oriented. It is concise and doesn’t waste the reader’s time.. It focuses on the receiver, not the sender.. It conveys information and solves problems.. Topic Sentences. Does each topic sentence raise one separate and distinct thesis point?. Is each topic sentence clearly linked to the thesis with a reference to the general subject or to your attitude about the subject?. Revise. vs . . Edit. Remember…this is the basis for understanding the difference between revising & editing.. ARMS. Substitute: . - trade words or . sentences. . . for others . is the process of manipulating and rearranging video shots to create a new work. Editing is usually considered to be one part of the . post production. process — other post-production tasks include titling, color correction, sound mixing, etc.. Extreme Photos – put yourself in a photo that seems impossible. Use your imagination. Use these example to help you out. Obscure Images – Think of something out of the ordinary seem real – In reality you are just combining 2 images..