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The in’s and out’s of writing graded readers

Rob WARING

Notre Dame Seishin University

JERA Kansai:

F

eb 3

rd

, 2019

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QuestionsWhat’s your favourite graded reader? Why?Which is better, to make a story readable, or enjoyable?

Should authors stick to the wordlists and grammar syllabus?

What factors make a good graded reader?

What kinds of problems do you think face graded reader authors?

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How are graded readers written?: The process Pre-ContractAuthors submit a one-page proposal outlining:

the entire story – it’s not supposed to be a teaser

the

intended levelIf acceptable, authors submit

a 2-3 page detailed synopsis a sample chapter

Hopefully a contract is offered. They usually have 4-6 months to finish the story.

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How are graded readers written?: The process 2Post Contract (development stage)

Author submits a draft of the whole story

The story editor makes comments -> revisions until okay

The text editor ensures the story fits the level’s linguistic guidelines – revisions until acceptable

Production stage The work (including art brief and endmatter) are handed to

the production team Proof reading, designing, commission art etc.Manufacturing and launch The book is printed and launched

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Creating a Graded Reader series syllabusDecisions are needed to about:

-how the syllabus will complement the publisher’s other materials

-the number of levels and headwords at each level

-how the levels will fit standard measures e.g. CEF, ERF Graded Reader Scale, TOEFL, IELTS , Cambridge exams etc.

-which grammatical items are ‘allowed’ at each level -which words and phrases to include at each level

-the types of endmatter - glossary, comp Qs, key etc. -how to find authors / material and compensate

them -target schedule of deliverables

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Making a wordlistDecisions need to be made about: -which words appear at which level

-whether to use a source corpus to decide frequency

-whether words are selected by frequency,

usefulness, range, learnability, L1 similarity, according to a published

wordlist?

-commonly known low frequency words and those with multiple    meanings e.g.

apple, pen, book, bank, service

-frequency derivatives (used vs. disused, uselessness;  

 excuse vs. inexcusable)

-which lexical phrases, phrasal verbs, idioms etc. to use -etc. etc. etc.

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Word frequency: Put these in frequency orderWord

Even

Company

WorldGirlBad

FunStudentSportFundamental

VentureWordCompensateIntervene

ChamberSwimParameter

PropositionPencilHomeworkQuiz

Rank108116182

408 (Boy 487)503 (Good 100)909918169718421922

Rank

2190220122332351294929823067 (pen

1935)40755786

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Families, flemmas, lemmas, derivatives, headwordsUse

Use

s

UsedUsingA useDis

useUsersMis

used

lemma

flemma

family

derivativesinflections

v

erb formnoun form

Headword

?????

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Level 1 lemmatizedA An

ABOUT

AFTER

AGAIN AGAINST ALL

ALWAYS AND ANGRY Angrily

ANY Anybody Anymore Anyone Anything Anyway Anywhere

AS

ASK

Asking

Asks

AT

AWAYBACK backsBAD badlyBE Am Are Aren’t Is Isn’t

Re S

BEAUTIFUL

BECAUSE

BEFORE

BIG

BREAK

Breaking

Breaks

broken

BUILD

Builds

Building

Buildings

BUT

BY

CAFE

cafes

CALL

Calling

Calls

CAN

Cannot

COLD

Colds

COME

Comes

Coming

DAY

Daily

Days

DIFFERENT

Differences

Difference

DIFFICULT

DO

Does

Doesn’t

DOWN

DRINK

Drinking

Drinks

EARLY

EASY

Easily

EAT

Eating

Eats

EVERY

Everybody

Everyday

Everyone

Everything Everywhere

FAMILY

Families

FASTFEEL Feeling Feelings FeelsFINISH Finishes FinishingFORFRIEND FriendsFROMGET Gets GettingGIVE Gives GivingGO

Goes

Going

GOOD

GOODBYE

Bye

GREAT

HAPPY

Unhappy

HAVE

Has

Having

HE

Him

His

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EditingHow will you know whether all the words at a given level have been used?How will you ensure sufficient recycling of words at each level?

What will happen to out of

level (illegal)

words?What % of a text can be out of level?What do you do if the grammatical construction is the only one that sounds natural but is out of level?

What balance of natural text vs linguistic grading. How ‘pure’ do you want to be?

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What is OGTE?A FREE editing tool for teachers and authorsIt allows users to analyze the vocabulary in a text by pre-set levels

Allows you to write something to a specific level

You can add your own wordlists (if you ask nicely

)www.er-central.com

/ogte

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www.er-central.com/ogte

Black – in level

Red

out of listRed underline – out of levelGreen

– ignored wordsPink – proper nouns

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Authoring Graded Readers

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What makes a Great Graded Reader?1. A Strong Concept‘

A guy comes home for his father

s funeral only to hear he was murdered. He has to discover the truth and ensure justice is done.’ This raises questions and is dramatic. We want to know who the murderer is, what with our hero do about it and how will he get the justice he wants?

Every story should have some kind of message or meaning to it. There has to be a reason for writing it. This question is answered by the end of the story.

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What makes a Great Graded Reader?2. High StakesA story of a family fleeing from a dictator has strong dramatic potential because the stakes are high. They are literally life and death.

A story about a girl who lost her teddy bear isn’t going to hold interest for long.

High stakes stories

make a reader sympathize with the characters. The stakes ought to be of vital importance to the

character.

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3. Great Characters and SettingsThere should be a good balance between the archetypical character and the ones you create (originality). Characters should be believable, alive, interesting, have depth and not be wooden.

All characters should be faithful to their characteristics and personality.

Characters emerge from their choices, so it’s good to put them in situations where they must choose what to

do to show this.

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3. Great Characters and Settings 2

You shouldn’t

tell

us they are courageous,

show

us by their

actions.

Characters should grow or ‘learn’ over the course of the story. Don’t just create a character to create ‘balance’. All characters and objects should have a reason for being there.Keep the plot within the psychological and linguistic reality of the readers.

Ensure backgrounds are understood.

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4. Real ConflictThere should be real conflict – or it will be boring.

Conflicts come from characters not situations and events

.

The conflict does not have to be physical, it can be mental.

The conflict should be inescapable. It must be progressive. It is your duty as an author to make your characters suffer.

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5. A Satisfying Believable PayoffAn inaccessible premise will inevitably fail to satisfy.

Every story needs an obligatory scene brings about the climax and resolution of a story.

If

your hero is out to save the world, we need to know whether he or she actually manages to save it.All of your plots need to be resolved in this way.

Emotional resolution is often more difficult to achieve than plot resolution.

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What Distinguishes Graded Reader Writing?With the words you choose, can you portray a convincing world?

Can you capture a character in a few telling details?

Can you write dialogue that sounds real?

Can you envisage exactly and honestly how your characters react in any situation you put them in?

A compelling opening: an opening chapter which really gets the story going, rather than spends too much time on overelaborate scene-setting. The ‘hook’ is key.Avoid throwing too many names or details into the first few paragraphs to get them ‘out of the way’. Bring each character in gently so as not to overload the reader.

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Non-FictionEasier and more difficult to writeLanguage differs from fictionYou need to be familiar with the topic and understand the core concepts wellArtwork can be expensive

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What Distinguishes Graded Reader Writing?Keep the story going – make sure

there is movement

in the story.

Chapter endings: put simply, a hook at the end of a chapterShow, don’t tell: ‘seeing the scene

’ will be easier for readers with limited access to the language. It’s much more satisfying to discover and experience the story through dialogue and action, rather than to be told about it as in a documentary.

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DialogueDialogue : ... should be lively - particularly for lower level readers. Processing large pieces of text in a new language is difficult.

… breaks up the text and helps the reader to engage effectively with the story and

experience

it as it happens like a scene in a movie. … should be natural… should move the action along

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What Distinguishes Graded Reader Writing?Other things to think about:Title: has to be accessible and exciting

Chapter headings: have to be intriguing and not give away the plot

Linear time frame: a linear time frame, particularly at lower levels, will be easier for the reader to follow

A sense of place: being specific about time and place really helps the reader to situate the story and makes for a good read

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Things to avoidLots of explanation and little dramaDeux et machina

: (acts of God) sudden resolutions to move the plot forward.

Inconsistency of setting, time, character – children acting as adults, shy people acting outgoing,

Unclear plot line: Too many flashbacksImplausible events, objects, characters, Unexplained events

Unpublishable events and objects: sex, gratuitous violence. Anything glorifying drugs, alcohol, pre-marital sex, sexual stereotyping,Not ensuring the villain gets his/her comeuppance.Over-expectation of background

knowledge

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How can I come up with a storyline?What is the decision / dilemma? > worry (how to bring up a child)Think of your setting?

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home, family scene

Who are the main characters? > father and young daughterHow do they conflict / what’s the resolution?

Father is very worried about his daughter’s sense of values Father sees daughter screaming for ice cream

Daughter rejects book as birthday present Daughter screams when dad takes away video game Father puts a iPad, book, money, cake and toy on a table - asks daughter to choose one

Daughter runs to father and hugs him ‘I choose daddy’

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How can I come up with a storyline?What is the decision / dilemma? > stand up for yourself , comeuppance & prideThink of your setting? > High

school English class

Who are the main characters?

macho boy vs. Shy girlHow do they conflict / what’s the resolution? Bully laughs at shy girl who has bad English pronunciation.

Boy’s friends laugh and mock her. Bully says she is hopeless. Bully plays in the park, his bike breaks.

Bully’s friends cannot repair it. Dilemma: panicking he is late for soccer. Shy girl repairs the bike. Bully helps her with English.

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Let’s try….Audience: 9-14 year oldsSeries structure: 6 levels from 100, 150, 200, 250, 300, 400, 500 Context: International Junior High School in AsiaCharacters: Mixture of characters from various backgrounds and ages some Asian,

s

ome not

What kind of ‘issues’?growing up as teens; cultural misunderstandings; loyalty and rivalry; group mentality; expectations of others; jealousy; cheating; bullying; loss; differently skilled people ; lack of

confidence; unfair treatment / favoritism; …Which ‘contexts’ or ‘settings?Rich vs

poor families; local vs ‘foreign’; town vs city people, skin color; test scores; death of a pet; romantic triangle; Dilemma> Setting> Characters> Conflict> Resolution

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Is the story ok?Bully laughs at shy girl who has bad English pronunciation. Boy’s friends laugh and mock her. Bully says she is hopeless.

Bully

plays in the park, his bike breaks.

Bully’s friends cannot repair it.Dilemma: panicking he is late for soccer.

Shy girl repairs the bike. Bully helps her with English.

Could the readers relate to this situation?Would this really happen? Whose story is this?Where is the emotion? How do you make the reader care?How would the pages look?

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How to get your graded reader published*Independent Authors

Goals:

* Books are actually

distributed

not

published by Xreading

1. To give authors of graded readers an outlet for their work2. To provide a wider range of reading material for students

Xreading for…