PPT-Revising to Improve Ideas and Organization

C FreeWritingWorksheetscom 2016 Four Major Revisions Cut Remove extraneous details Replace Find general or vague details and replace them with specific details Add Add details to support your main idea . The Graduate Writing Center (GWC). gwc.psu@gmail.com. Nicolette J. . Hylan. Matthew B. Price. Graduate Writing Center. One-on-one consultations. All types of writing, all stages of the process.. Hours for the coming week posted on Friday afternoons at 4 P.M. . Day 1. Day 2 student and partner are peer revising.. Day 3 student is revising their own story.. Revising . Read what you have written again.. Think . about what others said about it.. Rearrange . words or sentences.. Marc I. Rosen, M.D.. Most Successful Grants are Revise and Resubmits. Initial. or Revised?. Number Applications. Success. Rate. Initial Submission. 19,259. 8.6%. Revise and Resubmit. 5,373. 37.2%. Organization:Does my introduction get my readers’ attention and prepare them for what is to come?Are my paragraphs too short or too long? Are they unified, coherent, and welldeveloped? Are they Topic sentence should include….. The main . point/ reason . of the body paragraph (the topic). A position/ perspective on that topic. A clear link back to the thesis statement.. Sample thesis statement: . Monthly Webinar Series. May 21. , 2015. 2. Topic Agenda. Item. Time. . (min). Introduction. 2. The. Link Between Innovation and Employee Engagement: Chicken or Egg?. 5. Where . Organizations . Struggle. Seminary Hacks. Overview. Real writing begins not with the first draft of a text, but rather with the successive revisions and rewrites of that draft, each of which clarifies and refines the argument and message. The full set of processes and actions utilized in revision are what creates real writing that is lasting and memorable. . in the . NEW. . Normal. ?. Ideas to Action. . What does this mean to me?. How can I use this idea?. What can I do right away?. Kuala Lumpur. Oct 6. th. 2011. Anyone who tells you they enjoy change… should seek immediate professional help.. The Graduate Writing Center (GWC). gwc.psu@gmail.com. Nicolette J. . Hylan. Matthew B. Price. Graduate Writing Center. One-on-one consultations. All types of writing, all stages of the process.. Hours for the coming week posted on Friday afternoons at 4 P.M. . Eliminate flabby expressions.. Revising Tips. Wordy. Concise. at this point in time. now. due to the fact that. because. in very few cases. seldom. despite the fact that. although. feel free to. please. Vicky Thompson. Finding Your . First Mate. Learn how to motivate a specific set of overlooked members. . Understand the different types of members in your organization. . Objective. Draw/List your interpretation or characteristics of a leader.. Revising. Revising. is finding & correcting problems with . content. ; changing the ideas in your writing to make them clearer, stronger, and more convincing.. Revising looks at the “Big Picture”—the Idea level.. Revise. vs . . Edit. Remember…this is the basis for understanding the difference between revising & editing.. ARMS. Substitute: . - trade words or . sentences. . . for others . Richard J. Henley, FACHE, FHFMA. Managing Director. Wisconsin HFMA Spring Conference. May 18, 2017. . Agenda. 1. . Setting the stage. . Case study: Health System. . Case study: Payer. . Methodology:.