Peer assessment placemat NarrativeDescription Genre First Level What Went Well Even Better If Your title made me want to read more because You explained who what, how, when, why You used the describing bubble to describe shape, colour ...
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Peer assessment placemat
Narrative/Description Genre
First Level What Went Well Even Better If Your title made me want to read more because… You explained who what, how, when, why You used the describing bubble to describe shape, colour ... You described the main events in order by... You described the setting really well by using... Your ending brought the story together... Your title could be … You could describe the setting or character in more detail by using... You could use thinking verbs like ... You could use speech marks to tell us what the character was saying... You remember to link your ending to …<br>
First Level What Went Well? Even Better If…. I have used interesting openers to encourage the reader… I have used the description bubble to describe... I have written the story in an order that makes sense... I have linked my beginning to the end… I have written about who, what... I need to hook the reader in from the beginning by... I could use action verbs like … I need to describe my characters/ setting by… I need to read through my story to… I should have used speech marks to say…<br>
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Peer assessment placemat
Narrative/Description Genre
Second Level What Went Well Even Better If You have hooked the reader in by… You have used similes, metaphors, alliteration… You have thought about the sequence of events and… You have used speech marks to show what the character … You have described the setting/character in detail by … Your final paragraph has a twist or turn and … You could have created a more interesting beginning... You need to include more detail to describe the… Your main events were muddled, think about … You remember to use speech marks to show what the character… You try and think of a twist or turn at the end …<br>
Second Level What Went Well? Even Better If…. I have created an exciting beginning by… The similes and metaphors I have used are... I have described the thoughts, feelings and opinions of… I have written a conclusion which… I have described the setting and characters by using… I need to create a more interesting opening paragraph by... I could have used some metaphors and similes to describe… I could have used some action verbs like… I need to check that the writing is in the correct order because... I need to think of a better ending that…<br>
