Moonrise City night sky gives itself to me again when I have so little left to receive it I am dark crumbling and you are rivers and trees away searching your own night sky for a sign The strong gates of your heart ID: 390193
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Constructed ResponsesMoonriseSlide2
City night sky
gives itself to me again
when I have so little left to receive it.I am dark, crumblingand you are rivers and trees awaysearching your own night sky for a sign.The strong gates of your heartare wide open to me always, but,if only.So I wait, as seasons before, decades before,fathers and mothers before me still insidewatch and listen.Suddenly,bamboo, bones, fiber, fences,water, glistening koi,*all the tiny rooms,paths and places I hold your memoriesrelaxin audible, reverent wonderat the fullness formingon this horizon’s edge.*koi: colorful fish that symbolize love and friendship
Moonrise
by
Jenette
PurcellSlide3
In
Moonrise
, identify a theme and explain how the theme is developed throughout the poem. Use evidence to support your response.Constructed response questionSlide4
You are limited to 5 lines! There is
NO
space for summaries!!1st sentence ~ address/answer the question specifically (thesis statement)2nd sentence ~ a quote or paraphrase from the text that specifically supports your first sentence.3rd sentence ~ your analysis, explanation, elaboration or connection of 2nd and 1st sentence.4th sentence ~ Closing statement, inference, or significance.Tips to remember when answering constructed responses!Slide5
Question
In
Moonrise, identify a theme and explain how the theme is developed throughout the poem.AnswerIn Moonrise, the theme “love is complicated” develops through the changing mood.First sentence ~ Answer the question making sure to specifically identify any of the literary terms the question asks for, your thesis.Slide6
QuestionIn
Moonrise
, identify a theme and explain how the theme is developed throughout the poem.Answer:When the speaker says, “…you are rivers and trees away…” she implies that separation has complicated their relationship, creating a mournful mood.Sentence 2 ~Use specific details and examples from the text to support your sentence 1.Slide7
QuestionIn
Moonrise
, identify a theme and explain how the theme is developed throughout the poem.AnswerThere is a shift in the mood when the speaker says, “Suddenly…” and is followed by a “reverent wonder”.Sentence 3 Analyze, elaborate or connect the text to sentence 1…DO NOT SUMMARIZE!Slide8
QuestionIn
Moonrise
, identify a theme and explain how the theme is developed throughout the poem.AnswerThe dual mood shows how love can have its ups and downs and is complicated.Sentence 4 Closing statement, inference, or significance.Slide9
In
Moonrise
, the theme love is complicated develops through the changing mood. When the speaker says, “…you are rivers and trees away…” she implies that separation has complicated their relationship creating a mournful mood. There is a shift in the mood when the speaker says, “Suddenly…” and is followed by a “reverent wonder”. The dual mood shows how love can have its ups and downs and is complicated.FINAL THOUGHT!WRITE SMALL!!!!!Final answer