PPT-Session 12-(Revising) Conducting the Rhythm of Language-

Creating Cadence and Meaning through Syntax Listen to two songs and as you listen jot in your notebook Things you notice the rhythm differences in each song T he effects the music has on you not just that you dont like them. Ben Airth, CSI Program Manager. California Center for Sustainable Energy. Revising CSI Cost Data Reporting. 2. Since program inception, the CSI Program has looked at cost data via $/Watt. CSI Residential Third Party Owned Systems. Limericks are good examples of the poetic devices of rhyme and rhythm. . . There once was a girl from Kentucky. Who spent all her time with her ducky. Her duck took a dive. Into a beehive.. Now that ducky was very unlucky.. Casey at the Bat. . by Ernest Lawrence Thayer. The outlook wasn’t brilliant for the. . Mudville. nine that day…. In this . lesson, . you . will learn how to read a poem with rhythm . by identifying couplets.. Professional Development. Literacy Design Collaborative. Workshop Objectives. Review the LDC framework and explain how editing and revising are essential skills in the writing process.. Present the best practices for teaching . Day 1. Day 2 student and partner are peer revising.. Day 3 student is revising their own story.. Revising . Read what you have written again.. Think . about what others said about it.. Rearrange . words or sentences.. Rhyme Scheme. . a pattern or sequence where the rhyme occurs . (“Two Tramps in Mud Time” : . abab. . cdcd. ) . LABEL RHYME SCHEME:. A. A. B. C. C. D. LABEL RHYME SCHEME. Rhythm. The pattern or musical quality produced by the repetition of stressed and unstressed syllables.. Ben Airth, CSI Program Manager. California Center for Sustainable Energy. Revising CSI Cost Data Reporting. 2. Since program inception, the CSI Program has looked at cost data via $/Watt. CSI Residential Third Party Owned Systems. Rhythm. in . spoken. . language. is . easy. . . You. can . stress. . the. . new. . information. . to. . make. . the. . meaning. . clear. .. In. . writing. , . we. . should. . give. . more. RHYME. The repetition of sounds. Example: hat, cat, brat, fat, mat, sat. My Beard. by Shel Silverstein. My beard . grows. to my . toes. ,. I never wears no . clothes. ,. I wraps my . hair. . Around my . Revising. “The more natural a piece of writing seems, the more effort the writer has probably put into revising. Revising is so important that some writers say that writing . is. revising; they reinforce the point by calling their first drafts ‘zero drafts’.” . Eliminate flabby expressions.. Revising Tips. Wordy. Concise. at this point in time. now. due to the fact that. because. in very few cases. seldom. despite the fact that. although. feel free to. please. Refers to how attention is led around the garment or the outfit.. Rhythm is achieved when the lines, shapes, colors, textures, or patterns in clothing and accessories are arranged to lead the viewer’s eye easily from one part of the garment to another.. Business Writing Is…. Purposeful. Persuasive. Economical. Reader-oriented. It is concise and doesn’t waste the reader’s time.. It focuses on the receiver, not the sender.. It conveys information and solves problems.. Topic Sentences. Does each topic sentence raise one separate and distinct thesis point?. Is each topic sentence clearly linked to the thesis with a reference to the general subject or to your attitude about the subject?.