PPT-SENTENCE LEVEL EDITING

GOAL To discover sentence fluency errors to work on choosing stronger words and to start playing with your sentence structure Put squiggly lines under words that seem weak or informal Especially look for the . Alysan Croydon. The School of Teaching ESL. www.schooloftesl.org. Alysan Croydon. How are you feeling?. A. B. C. D. E. F. G. H. Alysan Croydon. Write your sentence. I am _(description/adjective)_______ like cat A.. A Unified Approach for Measuring Semantic Similarity. Mohammad . Taher. . Pilehvar. David . Jurgens. Roberto Navigli. Semantic. . Similarity. ; . how. . similar. are a . pair. of . lexical. . items. ICS 139w. 08/08/2011. Syllabus now available. http. ://www.ics.uci.edu/~jwross/courses/ics139w. /. What is prewriting?. First stage of the writing process. p. rewriting. d. rafting. r. evising. e. diting. MLA Format. Page Layout. Paragraphing. Title. Is your title original?!. Example: . “Luke Baldwin’s Vow”: an Exercise in . Decision-Making. Heart and Head Clash in “Luke Baldwin’s Vow”. Logic and Emotion in “Luke Baldwin’s Vow”. Craig Pickles, Section Chief, Sentence Computations . . . Federal Bureau of Prisons. Designation & Sentence Computation Center (DSCC). Grand Prairie, Texas. Just because you wrote it doesn’t mean you’re finished!. COPY EDITING. Copy editing is the QUALITY CONTROL function for a publication.. GOALS OF COPY EDITING:. Clarity - copy editors must make sure the story is clear and makes sense. Revising. Revising. is finding & correcting problems with . content. ; changing the ideas in your writing to make them clearer, stronger, and more convincing.. Revising looks at the “Big Picture”—the Idea level.. Revise. vs . . Edit. Remember…this is the basis for understanding the difference between revising & editing.. ARMS. Substitute: . - trade words or . sentences. . . for others . is the process of manipulating and rearranging video shots to create a new work. Editing is usually considered to be one part of the . post production. process — other post-production tasks include titling, color correction, sound mixing, etc.. Extreme Photos – put yourself in a photo that seems impossible. Use your imagination. Use these example to help you out. Obscure Images – Think of something out of the ordinary seem real – In reality you are just combining 2 images.. (Lessons 1-3). Sabrina Schmitz, CJE, Walsworth Yearbooks. Making Copy Shine . with Editing. The long-awaited day has finally arrived. . The . yearbook is being delivered . and every staffer anxiously waits to . cutty. ”. This means taking out unnecessary pauses between actors’ delivery of dialogue lines. Sometimes it . means . tightening the gaps within dialogue sentences through the use of carefully placed cutaways. It may also mean losing redundant lines of dialogue, after the director has reviewed your cut.. Kumar . Ranjan. Faculty, MJMC, MMHAPU, Patna. What is editing?. Editing is . . .. Spelling. Capitalization. Punctuation. Grammar. Sentence Structure. Subject/Verb Agreement. Consistent Verb Tense. Word . the. . Brazilian. . regulatory. framework: . can. . we. face . genome. . editing. ?. José Ricardo Jensen, DVM, Former Head, CEUAIB (IACUC - Instituto Butantan). Ricardo Palacios, Clinical R&D Manager - Division of Clinical Trials and Pharmacovigilance .