Who is Deidre and why does Sarah consult with her Do Deirdre and her team think Adnan is innocent What are some flaws or problems that Deidre and her team identify in Adnans case Objective I will be able to compose a third paragraph and if needed revise my first two paragraphs ID: 215120
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Do Now: Discuss with a partner.
Who is Deidre and why does Sarah consult with her?
Do Deirdre and her team think Adnan is innocent?
What are some flaws or problems that Deidre and her team identify in Adnan’s case?Slide2
Objective
: I will be able to compose a third paragraph and (if needed) revise my first two paragraphs.
Criteria for Success
A successful introduction includes….
A sentence that identifies the speaker and the text
A claim sentence that follows the format:
The writer uses ___________ to portray the
central idea of _____.
Writing strategy
Central idea
A
body paragraph includes
….
I
ntroduce
the quote
C
ite and write the quote
E
xplain how the quote is an example of that writing strategy
Specify
the exact word or phrase that reveals the writing strategy
E
xplain how the quote proves the central
idea
A
body
paragraph includes….
I
ntroduce the quote
C
ite and write the quote
E
xplain how the quote is an example of that writing strategy
Specify the exact word or phrase that reveals the writing strategy
E
xplain how the quote proves the central ideaSlide3
Introduction
(Two sentences
)Background information: Name the speaker, text, and
possibly
purpose
Claim/ Thesis
The writer uses ___________ to portray the
Writing strategy
central idea of ______________________.
Central
idea
Body Paragraph 1 (ICEE)
I
ntroduce the quote
C
ite and write the quote
E
xplain how the quote is an example of that writing
strategy
Specify the exact word or phrase that reveals the writing strategy
E
xplain
how the quote is an example of the central
idea
Body Paragraph 1 (ICEE)
I
ntroduce the quote
C
ite and write the quote
E
xplain how the quote is an example of that writing strategy
Specify the exact word or phrase that reveals the writing strategy
E
xplain how the quote is an example of the central ideaSlide4
Mini-Lesson: Task 3
Task 3 on the Regents asks you to identify a
central
i
dea
and support it with a
writing strategy.What is a central idea?What are some writing strategies?
In fiction, it is a theme or large idea that most of the events in the story can relate to.In nonfiction, it is a thesis, a claim, or the author’s main point.
Logos, ethos, pathos
Characterization, metaphor, simile, imagery, conflict, toneSlide5
Mini-Lesson: Characterization
Deidre
Right
. And people are saying his dark side, and his-- there was some notation about he was very controlling. I thought, “I wonder if he was really very controlling.” So there’s that. The cell phone thing for us and Justin Wolfe is that they used the cell phone records to say they cabin out the period of time when the shooter is driving to the place where the victim is and shooting him and then coming back. So they put those up on a board in the courtroom and say “look at this. He calls him right before he commits the murder, and he calls him right after he commits the murder.” Then you get everybody’s phone records, right? All these kids that are buying pot, smoking pot, selling pot, and everybody’s calling each other all the time. So then you stop and stand back and say: “Well, so what are they trying to say? That Justin Wolfe and these kids, these upper-middle class kids are so stupid that they get in the car and call and say: ‘Okay! I’m on my way to murder him. Okay! I just murdered him! I’m coming back now.’” You know what I mean? Who does that? Now, all these witnesses are saying: “Oh no, we were just all calling each other to buy pot.” Those calls that are infused with meaning by the prosecution’s theory have no meaning in space.
How is Justin characterized?
How does Deidre describe her client, Justin?
What is her central idea?
What is she trying to prove through characterizing him this way?
Where is
Justin characterized?
Highlight or underline lines that describe him.
Bonus: Circle any metaphors.Slide6
Mini-Lesson:
Characterization
Introduction
(Two sentences
)
Background
information: Deidre tells Sarah about her innocent client on the podcast Serial.Claim/ Thesis:
Deidre uses _______________ to portray the
Writing
strategy
central
idea that
______________________.
Central ideaSample Body Paragraph (ICEE)
Introduce the quote: Deidre imagines her client saying C
ite and write the quote “Okay! I’m on my way to murder him. Okay! I just murdered him! I’m coming back now” (lines 16-17).
Explain how the quote is an example of that writing strategy:
Deidre characterizes her client by imagining what he said. Specify the exact word or phrase that reveals the writing strategy
She implies that he would be fine with murdering someone when she writes “Okay!” twice (lines 16-17). The exclamation mark also implies that he may even be excited about the murder he committed. Explain
how the quote is an example of the central idea Deidre characterizes her client as asinine to show that it is highly unlikely he would make phone calls like that. Her characterization of him stresses that the argument that he made calls before and after the murder is inane.
characterization
the argument against her client is asinine.Slide7
Sarah
Koenig
Don was
Hae’s
new boyfriend. The police considered his alibi iron-clad, he was working at
LensCrafters
all day. But, see, this is how it is with Deirdre. A conversation with her never seems to begin exactly. It’s already there, on going, her thoughts churning, and you just kinda join in when you’re ready and hope that you can keep up. She is not a small talker or a beater around of bushes. You discuss whatever it is you came to discuss full-on, looking it squarely in the face. She has no time for bullshit. Not because she’s above it or anything but because she actually has no time. She’s one of the busiest and most curious people I’ve ever met.How is
Deidre characterized?How does Sarah describe Deidre?What is Sarah’s central idea?
What is she trying to prove through characterizing Deidre this way?
Student Practice
Where is Deidre characterized
?
Highlight or underline lines that describe her.
Bonus: Circle any metaphors.Slide8
Introduction
(Two sentences
)Background information: Name the speaker, text, and
possibly
purpose
Claim/ Thesis
The writer uses ___________ to portray the Writing strategycentral idea of ______________________. Central ideaBody Paragraph 1 (ICEE)Introduce the quote
Cite and write the quoteExplain how the quote is an example of that writing strategy Specify the exact word or phrase that reveals the writing strategy Explain how the quote is an example of the central idea
Student Practice: Compose the introduction and first body paragraph.Slide9
Do Now
We will begin with a quiz. Please take out a pen and clear your desk.Slide10
Objective
: I will be able to compose a third paragraph and (if needed) revise my first two paragraphs.
Criteria for Success
A successful introduction includes….
A sentence that identifies the speaker and the text
A claim sentence that follows the format:
The writer uses ___________ to portray the central idea of _____. Writing strategy
Central ideaA body paragraph includes….I
ntroduce
the quote
C
ite and write the quote
E
xplain how the quote is an example of that writing strategy Specify the exact word or phrase that reveals the writing strategy Explain how the quote proves the central idea
A body paragraph includes….Introduce the quoteCite and write the quote
Explain how the quote is an example of that writing strategy Specify the exact word or phrase that reveals the writing strategy Explain how the quote proves the central ideaSlide11
Mini-Lesson:
Characterization
Introduction
(Two sentences
)
Background
information: Deidre tells Sarah about her innocent client on the podcast Serial.Claim/ Thesis:
Deidre uses _______________ to portray the
Writing
strategy
central
idea that
______________________.
Central ideaSample Body Paragraph (ICEE)
Introduce the quote: Deidre imagines her client saying C
ite and write the quote “Okay! I’m on my way to murder him. Okay! I just murdered him! I’m coming back now” (lines 16-17).
Explain how the quote is an example of that writing strategy:
Deidre characterizes her client by imagining what he said. Specify the exact word or phrase that reveals the writing strategy
She implies that he would be fine with murdering someone when she writes “Okay!” twice (lines 16-17). The exclamation mark also implies that he may even be excited about the murder he committed. Explain
how the quote is an example of the central idea Deidre characterizes her client as asinine to show that it is highly unlikely he would make phone calls like that. Her characterization of him stresses that the argument that he made calls before and after the murder is inane.
characterization
the argument against her client is asinine.Slide12
Introduction
(Two sentences
)Background information: Name the speaker, text, and
possibly
purpose
Claim/ Thesis
The writer uses ___________ to portray the Writing strategycentral idea of ______________________. Central ideaBody Paragraph 1 (ICEE)Introduce the quote
Cite and write the quoteExplain how the quote is an example of that writing strategySpecify the exact word or phrase that reveals the writing strategy E
xplain
how the quote is an example of the central
idea
Body Paragraph 1 (ICEE)
I
ntroduce the quoteCite and write the quoteExplain how the quote is an example of that writing strategySpecify the exact word or phrase that reveals the writing strategy
Explain how the quote is an example of the central ideaStudent Practice: Complete your response.Slide13
Closing
Do you feel ready to write a Task 3 Response without an outline?
What questions do you have?